This story was written by Ryan Smith. The McInTots characters (Taylor McIntosh, Isabelle McIntosh, and Brenda McIntosh) all belong to Tyler Davasel. I by no means own the rights to these characters.
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CHAPTER 1
The Twin Problems
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“EEEEK!!!” Izzy screamed, running out or her with with a towel. She had just gotten out of her room, and had went to her room to change, and just as she started undoing her towel, Tay jumped out, scaring her. She quickly wrapped the towel around herself, gripping it tightly as she did so.
“TAY! GET OUT OF MY ROOM, YA WEIRDO!!!” She shouted, obviously upset with her twin.
“But Izzzeeeaah! I don't waaahhnaah!” He whined, poking his head out of the room.
“Tay, I need to get dressed. Get out of my room.” Thoughts ran through her mind. Maybe hitting him would get him out... But Brenda, the kid's mother, having heard Izzy's scream from outside while waiting for laundry to finish, dashed upstairs, immediately asking Izzy, “Are you two alright? Are either of you hurt?”
“No mommy. Tay must've hid in my room while I was in the shower 'cause when I went in my room to get dressed he jumped out and scared me half to death! Mommy, please get him out! I don't wanna have him watching me while I get dressed!” Tears welled up in her eyes, and as she tried fighting them back, Brenda bent down and wiped them away.
“Don't worry sweetie. I'll get him out. The drier should be finished drying clothes by now. Why don't you grab an outfit out of there and change in my room,” she said, kissing the girl on the forehead, hearing “Yes mommy!” as Izzy started down the stairs.
One twin down, one to go.
“Taylor, can you please come here?”
“But mommy! I don't wanna be spanked!” he cried.
“I'm not going to spank you Taylor, just please come here.”
“BUHT MAAHMMEEEEAAAHHH!!! I DON'T WAAAHHNNNAAA GET SPANKED!!!” he sobbed. Okay, new tactic.
Brenda slowly walked in the room, immediately spotting a sobbing Tay in the far corner of the room. She walked over to him, bending down, and wiping away his tears.
“Tay, I'm not going to spank you. I promise. But, can you please look at me?”
Taylor calmed down, and looked up, with a hint of fear still on his face.
“Tay, why did you come in here and hide?”
“Cuz I wanted to play with Izzy, but she wasn't in here, so I thought I would scare her,” he whimpered.
“Why would you scare your sister, Tay?”
“Cuz it's funny...” He said, eliciting a giggle.
“Tay, think about how she feels about that. Besides, she could have hurt you, or herself...” Brenda said with a stern voice. Tay's eyes welled up once more.
“I'm sorry!” He cried. Brenda took him in her arms and comforted him.
“I'm not the one you need to tell that to, honey.”
Brenda took Tay downstairs to find Izzy. They found her watching TV.
“Isabelle, your brother has something to tell you.”
Izzy turned the TV off and went over to them.
“Izzy, I'm so-------” Izzy ran over to him, and hugged him.
“Forgiven.”
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End of Chapter One
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Credits:
Brenda, Izzy, and Tay McIntosh – Tyler Davasel
McinTots Original Story/Comic – Tyler Davasel
McInTots Abridged Story – Ryan Smith
Cover Design – Ryan Smith
McInTots belongs to Tyler Davasel
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