Felinar and Little_shewolf are super happy and excited to finally introduce Cérès' Prologue and comic to you ! This is it, Cérès is welcoming you in a big adventure ! Let's start this for real !
1) Out of curiosity, I did click on the links provided and found that Felinar is no longer the artist as of a month ago. Yet you say sylux helped with an English conversion this month. Does that mean even without an artist that the comic is still undergoing tweaks?
2) If the current grammar is 100% the way it should be, then it's incredibly confusing and English readers will have difficulty following along. It looks almost like the words were translated but the sentences were not formatted for English grammar. Might want to talk to a native English speaker about localization if you are truly planning on having this comic in more than one language.
Couple of things: 1) Out of curiosity, I did click on the links provided and found that Felinar is
This is the wrong version of this page, the author submitted an updated correct one on the Patreon and on FA and DA. ^^ Plus Felinar did some mistakes with it and it wasn't the version corrected by Sylux. But the right one is on here : http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17608006/ ;)
And yes, Felinar gave up and left the project. But another artist will work on a short comic just for the patrons for the next two months. Then, the authors will try to get back on the comic's story with Muramuri or Abelsword.
This is the wrong version of this page, the author submitted an updated correct one on the Patreon a