I do not why I keep brining this up but I just love the way you draw rain. One criticism I do have is these last two or three pages. I know it's important to setup to tell us how Eddie and Cassandra meet but these pages seems a little dull. We really do need some action soon. The previous pages could have been combined into one or two pages and the overall comic so far would have felt a lot more streamlined. I know that the atmosphere is trying to be built up but we don't want to drag down the entire narrative in rain soaked moments. Back to the positives...We have only just met these two characters but you do a great job at conveying mannerisms in just a few panels. I really like Cassandra's expression in the second panel. She is not having a good time right now and still does not really trust this mysterious woman who appeared out of nowhere...but she really does not want to stay out in the rain anymore. An umbrella sounds really good to Cassandra right now. The final three panels do an excellent job of conveying emotion.
I do not why I keep brining this up but I just love the way you draw rain. One criticism I do have i