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OoT Retelling: Ch.4 The Kokiri Emerald

Mario & Luigi: Superstar Saga: Prologue 1 - The Ambassador of Beanbean Kingdom
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Keywords zelda 2333, time 1953, link 1719, legend 693, ocarina 82
Chapter 4: The Kokiri Emerald


"I killed Queen Gohma and removed the curse on the Great Deku Tree, right?" asked Link nervously stepping backwards.

"It should," answered Navi sticking close to Link.

"Then why are all of Queen Gohma's children still here?" continued Link as he kept his distance from the arachnids, all their eyes glaring at him and a hostile hissing coming from their maws.  One leapt at Link who quickly cut through it with his sword.  Another two leapt after.  Link bashed away the first his shield then dodged the second and counted, stabbing his sword though its head.  Breathing heavily, Link watched as more of Gohma's children dropped from the egg sac on the ceiling, restoring the few Link killed and greatly increased their numbers.  Dropping his sword, Link dropped to his knees.

"What are you doing?" cried Navi.  "If you don't keep fighting they'll kill you."

"I know that," panted Link.  "But I just don't have the strength anymore.  That last assault on Queen Gohma took all I had left.  I thought after that I wouldn't need to fight, but looks like it didn't turn out that way."

"But this doesn't make sense," thought Navi.  "The curse should be broken.  The Great Deku Tree should be able to dispel all the evil in the forest again, unless... were we too late?"

The spiders surrounded Link and Navi from all sides, the front of the swarm about the pounce.  Smoke suddenly started to erupt from their body and they screeched in agony before their bodies crumbled to dust one after another.  As this happened, a blue light enveloped around Link and Navi.  Link felt a strange weightlessness come over him as the light blocked all else from view, then as quickly as it appeared it vanished and gently Link landed back on the ground.  Looking around, Link saw they were no longer deep within the roots of the Great Deku Tree, but once more outside in front of him.

"Well done, Link," spoke the Great Deku Tree.  "Thou hast verily demonstrated thy courage.  I knew that thou wouldst be able to carry out my wishes."

"I am glad I was able to help you and the rest of the forest," answered Link.  "I don't want to think what would have happened if I failed."

"Now, I have yet more to tell ye," continued the Great Deku Tree.  "Now... listen carefully... A wicked man of the desert cast this dreadful curse upon me."  Upon hearing those words, the dark man from his dream popped up in his mind.  "This evil man ceaselessly uses his vile powers in his search for the Sacred Realm that is connected to Hyrule.  For it is in that Sacred Realm that one will find the divine relic, the Triforce, which contains the essence of the gods."

"The Sacred Realm?  The Triforce?" asked Link.  "What are they?  Why does he want them?"

"Before time began, before spirits and life existed," explained the Great Deku Tree.  "Three golden goddesses descended upon the chaos that was Hyrule.  Din, the goddess of power, with her strong flaming arms; she cultivated the land and created the red earth.  Nayru, the goddess of wisdom, poured her wisdom onto the earth and gave the spirit of law to the world.  And Farore, the goddess of courage, with her rich soul, produced all life forms who would uphold the law.  The three great goddesses, their labors completed, departed for the heavens and golden sacred triangles remained at the point where the goddesses left the world.  Since then, the sacred triangles have become the basis of our world's providence.  And, the resting place of the triangles has become the Sacred Realm."

"Such a thing must have unimaginable power," commented Navi.  "The curse on the Great Deku Tree was already strong, but if that man could make the Triforce power his own I do not know if it would be possible to stop him."

"Thou must never allow the desert man in black armor to lay his hands on the sacred Triforce," warned the Great Deku Tree to Link.  "Thou must never suffer that man, with his evil heart, to enter the Sacred Realm of Legend.  That evil man who cast the death curse upon me and sapped my power.  Because of that curse, my end is nigh."

"What are you talking about?" asked Navi.  "We did just as you asked and broke the curse and dispelled the evil inside you."

"Though your valiant efforts to break the curse were successful, I was doomed before you started," he admitted.  "Yes, I will pass away soon... But do not grieve for me...  I have been able to tell you of these important matters.  You are Hyrule's last hope.  Link... Go now to Hyrule Castle.  There, thou will surely meet the Princess of Destiny.  Take this stone with you.  The stone that man wanted so much, that he cast the curse upon me."

A flash of green light appeared in front of Link.  Reaching his hands out into it, Link watched as the light faded and a spherical emerald wrapped in gold shaped like the Kokiri Emblem appeared in his hands. It shined with a mysterious and mesmerizing power.

"It was for this that that evil man placed a curse upon the Great Deku Tree," thought Navi.  "Looking at Link's pained expression she could tell the same thought was on his mind.

"The future depends upon thee, Link," spoke the Great Deku Tree, his voice once mighty voice growing fainter with each word.  "Thou art courageous.  Navi the fairy...  Help Link to carry on my will...  I entreat ye... Navi..."

"I will," sobbed Navi.  "I will with all my heart."

"Great Deku Tree..." Link spoke weakly, the Kokiri Emerald slipping out his hands as he saw his bark and leaves turning gray.

"Good... bye..." his voice echoed and then faded into the wind.  His leaves fell off his branches and crumbled to dust, petrified like the rest of him.

"Oh, no, Great Deku Tree," cried Saria, her voice coming from behind Link.

"Saria?" said Link, unaware of her presence till just now.  "How long were you there?"

"I'm sorry," she apologized.  "I was worried about you, but when I saw you suddenly appear in front of the Great Deku Tree I couldn't help approach you.  I heard everything and I can't believe that he's really gone."

"I'm sorry," replied Link solemnly tearing up.  "I did all I could and yet it wasn't good enough."

"Link," shouted Mido sternly running up to him.

"Mido?" replied Link surprised and even more when his fellow Kokiri punched him in the face with all his might, knocking him to the ground.

"Mido!" cried Saria shocked at how aggressive Mido was being.

"Stay out of this," snapped Mido.  "I saw it all too and I am going to speak my mind.  Link, you have been through a tough ordeal and accomplished your goal.  Because of that I can accept that you have taken your first step to becoming a man.  I won't let you ruin it by dishonoring the Great Deku Tree with your tears."

"My tears?" Link asked confused.

"Don't you remember what he said?" shouted Mido.  "Not to grieve for him.  He does not blame you for being unable to save him so you shouldn't feel regret for it and that means you can't be sad and cry."  Offering, Link a hand, he helped him back to his feet.  "That being said, while the Great Deku Tree may have forgiven you I have not!"  With all his might one again, Mido swung another strong punch at Link.  "I can't forgive you for letting the Great Deku Tree die!"

"There was nothing Link could have done," cried Saria.  "Stop it, Mido!"

"I said to keep out of this!" yelled Mido.  "I want to make things clear for Link right now.  If the Great Deku Tree gave him this new task to fulfill then he better get stronger!  You hear me?  If this is the best you can do you won't ever be able to complete this task.  Is this all the resolve you have?"

"You want to see my resolve?" asked Link, his body trembling and his teeth gritting.  With all the strength and anger he could muster, he punched Mido back and knocked him to the ground.

"Not bad," admitted Mido rubbing his cheek and looking up at Link.  "That's the first time you even hit me back."  Dusting himself off, he stood back up and turned away.  "You have gone through a lot so go home and rest until tomorrow.  Then tomorrow get going on your quest and I don't want to see you back here again until you've completed it."

"I understand," answered Link, picking up the Kokiri Emerald and making his way back to the village.

Navi turned to the remains of the Great Deku Tree and whispered, "Goodbye... Great Deku Tree," and then followed after Link.

"Thank you, Mido," said Saria.

"For what?" asked Mido.

"For helping, Link," she told him.  "I didn't realize it at first, but you did that to give him the push to move forward when he was losing heart.  That was probably the kindest thing you have ever done for him."

"Think what you want," replied Mido looking at the Great Deku Tree.  "It isn't fun picking on someone who can fight back.  So let him go off on this adventure to save the world.  Now maybe you can spend more time with me rather than that crybaby."

"Well, my opinion of you has change, if a little," chuckled Saria smiling.

"Hopefully for the better," said Mido before pausing for a moment.  "I hate to ask you this, but it won't be long before the rest of the village learns about the Great Deku Tree's death, but I think it would be best if you were the one to tell them.  I'm not so good at talking about such things."

"I understand," Saria answered.  "I'll talk to them."


Back in his home, Link was quick to start his preparations.  Grabbing his Wolfos skin backpack, he placed it on his table and started filling it with essentials for his travels.  First, he placed inside the Kokiri Emerald, wrapped in a leather pouch.  He then added in some Deku Sticks, Deku Nuts, and seed ammo for his slingshot.

"How much food do you think we'll need?" Link asked Navi.  "I don't know how far Hyrule Castle is from Kokiri Forest.  Do you know?"

"It is on the other side of Hyrule Field," Navi explained.  "That is at least a day's travel by foot.  But don't you think you should at least take some time to rest now?"

"I will," said Link as he packed some fruit in his backpack.  "I just want to make sure I don't forget anything.  The Great Deku Tree told us I had to meet this 'Princess of Destiny,' but who knows what else we will have to do afterwards?"

"Well, the Kokiri Emerald does have another name," commented Navi.  "It is also known as the Spiritual Stone of Courage.  The Great Deku Tree told me about this and two other stones, the Spiritual Stone of Power and the Spiritual Stone of Wisdom.  Our task might be to find them too."

"Why didn't you mention anything about this sooner?" asked Link.

"I had no idea that the Great Deku Tree possessed the Spiritual Stone of Courage or that it was a key to such great power," she explained.  "As for the other two stones, I have no idea where they could be or it they even exist."

"The Great Deku Tree told me to go see the princess so that will be a good place to start," said Link.  "Uh, but what is a princess anyway?"

"You don't know?" asked Navi.  "Well, a princess is girl of royalty who governs and rules over a country.  Princesses usually dress in fancy dresses with lots of frills and wear jewelry and a crown on their head.  If she is in Hyrule Castle then she must be the princess of Hyrule."

"Then she is the one in charge of Hyrule like Mido is in charge of the Kokiri?" asked Link shuddering at the thought of Mido dressed as Navi had described.

"No!" snapped Navi bonking Link on the head.  "A princess only refers to a daughter of royalty.  She might have some power, but the true rulers of the country would be her father and her mother the king and queen.  She would not be in charge until came of age.  There is a lot more to it than that, but it is rather intricate and probably too confusing for you to comprehend right now anyway.  The one thing that worries me is that if that is the princess we have to meet, how will we?"

"We just have to go to the castle and find her," Link replied.

"The castle will be well guarded," stated Navi.  "They won't let just anyone see the princess, much less a child.  We may have to figure some way to sneak in and out without being seen.   Oh, the more I think about this, the more I wonder how we can possibly do it.  What do you think, Link?"  Navi's question was answered with a loud snore.  Turning to look, she saw Link slumped over in bed, asleep before he was even able to get under the covers.  "I guess there is no point in worrying about it now anyway.  We have got a lot to do tomorrow so I had better get some sleep too."  Fluttering over to Link, she slipped into his head and rested atop his head.  "Goodnight Link."

A lone girl dressed in soft pink cloth kneeled before a bed of flowers in her garden.  She had beautiful golden hair, and clear blue eyes and pointed ears.  Her dress had become dirtied from tending to her plants, but she didn't even notice.  Grabbing her watering can, she started to gently douse the plants with water, but quickly the water slowed to a trickle.

"Don't worry little flowers," she said in a sweet voice.  "I'll be right back with some more water for you."  Standing up, she walked over to the manmade stream flowing around her garden and started to fill the watering can up with the crystal clear water. As she began to fill it up, the sky started to darken.  Looking up, she saw the sky was quickly getting covered with billowing, black clouds.  In no time at all, the midday sun was covered over and it was as if night had suddenly came.

Dropping the watering can, the girl ran out of her garden and through the courtyard.  She searched frantically for help, but there was nobody around.  "Hello!" she called out with no answer.  "Why aren't the guards here on patrol?  Where did everybody go?  I have to tell my father about all this.  Something terrible has happened, but what if he is gone too?"

Rushing through the front gates and running down the halls, the girl struggled with her dress to keep from tripping over it as she made her way to the throne room.  Looking out the windows as she passed them by, she watched as the dark clouds began to descend down to the castle and all the land surrounding it.  "Father!" she cried shoving the double doors open and approached the throne where her father was sitting.  "Father, something terrible has happened.  In the sky, there is a dark cloud..." Her voice trailed off as her fear transformed to terror as she saw her father had a large sword impaled through his chest and even through his throne.  His blood was barely noticeable against this regal robe, but it was visible as it dripped down his throne and onto the floor.  "Father, no.  How could this happen?"

The torches lighting the room suddenly went out one after another till the room was as dark as the outside.  Turning towards the window, the girl saw the clouds had reached the ground by her garden.  The flowers she had been tending started to wither and die.  As the clouds turned the water, it became black and murky.  "Is this the end of the world?" she asked fearfully as the clouds soon made their way towards her.  Running away, she left the throne room as the clouds burst through the window scattering shards of glass everywhere.

Nearing the front gate, the girl attempted to run outside, but the clouds had already begun to enter through it as well.  In desperation, she turned towards the spiral stairway and hurried to the higher floors of the castle, the clouds giving quick chase.  Breathing heavily as she searched for safety, the black clouds continued to close in on her more and more, sealing off every passage open to her.  The girl then pushed in a stone on the wall opening a hidden passageway.  She followed it all the way up to the top of one of the castle's towers and looked out the window.  What was once the view of all of Hyrule was now nothing but endless clouds.

"It's all gone," the girl cried, falling to her hands and knees in sorry.  Hyrule Field... Death Mountain... Zora River...  Lake Hylia... Kokiri Forest...  Everywhere."  Looking up at the dark sky the girl pleaded with all her heart and soul.  "Please goddesses...  If you can hear me I beseech thee...  Do not let this darkness consume Hyrule."  Those words rang through her heart over and over again then a green light shined through the clouds from the direction of Kokiri Forest causing the clouds to dissipate and then vanish completely.  Gazing over to the forest, she watched as a boy emerged from the forest.  She was able to clearly see him clad in green and a fairy fluttering at his side, but she was unable to make out his face.  "Who are you?" she called out to him.  "What is your name?"

The boy didn't answer her.  Instead, he held out the Spiritual Stone of Courage, the Kokiri Emerald.  It glowed just as brilliantly as the light that had pierced through the clouds.  Unsatisfied with his answered, the girl kept calling out to him desperate for an answer.

"Princess," cried Impa nudging her from the side of her bed.  The young girl was tossing and turning while crying out in her sleep.  "Princess, please wake up."  Opening her eyes, the girl panted heavily.  Wiping her forehead with a close, Impa sighed with relief.  "You had me so worried, princess.  I can only imagine how terrible a nightmare you must have been having."

"It was truly terrible," she answered.  "But I do not think it was merely a nightmare.  It was another warning that darkness has fallen on Hyrule."

"Is it about that man, Ganondorf, again?" asked Impa.

"I am almost certain.  I can clearly recall nearly every detail of this premonition and I know the darkness in this represents that man," she replied.  "Just being near him gives me a sense of dread, but nobody else will listen to a word I have said.  Not the guards or the nobles.  Not even my own father will believe me.  They only see him as the humble Gerudo King pleading for aid for his people.  How can they be fooled by him so easily?"

"He hides his malevolence well," explained Impa.  "He has great charisma and perhaps even an enchantment to further charm everyone around him.  As a member of the Sheikah, I have trained to resist such magic.  As for you, from the day you were born you were blessed and protected with great magical abilities of light.  Dark magic like that won't have any effect on you.  But without proof there is no way we can help the others to see the truth about Ganondorf."

"I know," sighed the princess.  "He hides his actions well.  But now I think I know what he is after.  I believe he desires to gain passage into the Sacred Realm and obtain the Triforce."

"Are you certain?" asked Impa alarmed.

"Yes," she continued.  "In my dream this time I was able to clearly see one of the keys to gaining passage to the Sacred Realm, the Spiritual Stone of Courage."

"If that is the case, then we must do all we can to stop him from getting to the Sacred Realm," said Impa.

"Indeed we must," she agreed.  "But I believe there is another who will help us.  In my dream a boy emerged from Kokiri Forest holding the Spiritual Stone of Courage.  He banished the darkness covering Hyrule.  I believe that he might be someone chosen by the goddesses to save Hyrule and I feel that we may appear before us very soon."

"How will we know if it is him?" questioned Impa curiously.

"There are three things I was able to see in my dream," she explained.  "While I could not see his face, I did see he was dressed all in green.  Also, he had with him a fairy.  And in his possession should be the Spiritual Stone of Courage."

"I am not sure how a child will be able to help us save Hyrule," commented Impa.  "But I have seen you have premonitions like this for years and every last one has come to pass and I will put my trust in this vision too."

"Thank you, Impa," the girl yawned, her mind comforted by Impa's support.

"I am your loyal caretaker," Impa said gently stroking her head.  "I will also be by your side to protect you and ensure your safety.  Now go back to bed and get some rest."

"We're leaving already?" asked Navi to Link as she looked outside his tree home.  The sky was dark, but the sun was on the verge of rising over the horizon.  "I know we wanted to get an early start, but I thought you at least wanted to say your goodbyes to everyone first.  We don't know how long we will be gone for after all."

"I know, but it will just make it harder for me to want to leave if I have to see everyone," admitted Link as he put on his backpack and then his sword and shield.  "It will just be easier this way."

"If that's what you decided," said Navi.  "Then go ahead and I'll be at your side the whole way through."

"Thanks," replied Link.  "I am glad I finally have my partner fairy.  Now let's go."

Exiting his home, Link looked around the village.  Fireflies were everywhere, their lights still visible in the slowly fading darkness.  The sound of crickets was everywhere accompanied by the croaking of frogs in the stream flowing through the village.

"It feels a little strange seeing the village so empty," commented Link as he climbed down the ladder of his tree home.  "Normally when I leave my home the village is already busy with the other Kokiri going about their business."

"I bet you never expected to wake up so early," stated Navi.  "Especially when only yesterday you were sleeping half the day away."

"I probably won't be doing that again," admitted Link.  "Not until this quest is over.  Then I think I'll sleep for seven years.  I am saving all of Hyrule after all.  I think I deserve that much at least."

"Very funny," said Navi sarcastically.  Link continued his way to the edge of the village and then down a trail in the forest.  "So, do you know the way out of the forest?"

"Yeah," answered Link.  "Even though I've never set foot outside the forest I've gone up to the edge.  The only way out of the forest is a bridge.  It is just up ahead."  Just as Link said, they quickly arrived at the bridge.  The huge cluster of trees that made up the forest ended and a large hilly field began.  "There it is, Hyrule Field!"  Running excitedly onto the bridge, Link stopped halfway across as a voice caught his attention, the voice of Saria.

"I had a feeling you might try to leave in secret," she said.

"Saria," replied Link turning and walking over to her.  "I'm sorry.  I know it was selfish to try and leave without saying anything, but I don't know what I could say."

"It's ok," answered Saria.  "I understand.  I knew that you would leave the forest some day, Link.  Because you are different from me and all the others. But that's ok, because we'll be friends forever... won't we?"

"Saria," Link replied at a loss of words for a moment.  Taking a deep breath and clenching his fists, Link looked her in the eyes and answered her.  "Of course we are!  We'll be friend forever no matter how far away we are from one another or how much time passes.  You have my word on that."

"For someone who was not sure how to say goodbye you are doing a great job," commented Saria smiling.  Reaching at her side, she took her clay instrument, an ocarina and held it out for Link.  "I want you to have this ocarina.  Please take good care of it."

"Your ocarina," replied Link looking down at it in surprise before picking it up.  "But that is your treasure.  You can't just give it away."

"I can because it is my precious treasure," she explained.  "And I feel that it is something you will need for your journey.  And when you play my ocarina, I hope you will think of me."

"Of course I will," answered Link, carefully pocketing the instrument with the greatest of care.

"I know you will," she told him.

Smiling at Saria, Link was about to take a step towards her, but restrained himself and he took a few steps back instead.  "I had best get going," Link said.  Turning around he ran across the bridge as fast as he could with Navi following after him.  "Goodbye!"  Saria didn't stop watching Link until he vanished out of the forest.

Part 1: The Stone of Courage - End
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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OoT Retelling: Ch.3 Queen Gohma
OoT Retelling: Ch.5 Lon Lon Ranch
Link has succeeded in defeating Queen Gohma, but is his quest over... or is it merely beginning.

After finishing up the first part of the story I'd like to hear a bit of feedback from my readers.  Do you think I should keep going with the retelling?

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