Hoping you are well. I worry a little that is not well translated je. I use my little knowledge of English to confirm whether this well-written. In short, enjoy the below.
mm, for the second to last panel, you should've had Shadow saying "It had me so excited watching you eat that ice cream, I didn't want you to stop." It had me a little confused for the meaning it took me a little bit to understand it... hope it helps ^^U
mm, for the second to last panel, you should've had Shadow saying "It had me so excited watching you
oh, okay ^^ lol, I asked my friend (or ex-friend, I have no idea anymore with her) for help translating it and I tried using google translate, lol. Thanks anyway for confirming it~
oh, okay ^^ lol, I asked my friend (or ex-friend, I have no idea anymore with her) for help translat