"Do you think I can take a shower?" or "Can I use your shower?" -"Sure ...no prob."
-A good alternative there.
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Panel 3
"Girls, I'm going to buy something. Don't you want me to buy something for you?- Uh, where's April?" or, "Hey ladies. I'm going to the store. Want anything? Wait, Where's April? " "She's taking a shower."
Panel 4
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"Shower?..."
Looks good to me.
Here's my input: ~~~ Quote: Panel 1 After the movie we had some pizza. ~~~ -Had to add a per
I was going to make a post correcting some of the grammar, but this looks to have almost exactly what I would have put, so I'll simply second the idea of using these.
I was going to make a post correcting some of the grammar, but this looks to have almost exactly wha
Angel: Omg the girl i hsve the hots for is showing in my house! Scotty: She's quite the looker. Worth the attention. Angel: April Scotty: Annie Angel:... wait, what? Scotty: i'm not taking it back. XD
Angel: Omg the girl i hsve the hots for is showing in my house! Scotty: She's quite the looker. Wort
"After the movie we had some pizza." This one was flawless, I just added a period.
Panel 2
"Do you think I can take a shower?" -"Sure, no prob" This one was good as well. I'm assuming you're going for an informal tone, so I didn't finish the word "problem."
Panel 3
"Girls, I'm going out to buy something, do you want me to get something for you?... Uh, where's April?" "She's taking a shower." Fluidity, capitalization and punctuation fixes.
Panel 4
"Shower?..."
Panel 1 "After the movie we had some pizza." This one was flawless, I just added a period. Panel