I'm not trying to dump on you but I can't sugarcoat the fact that this is not very good. You sound like you are just singing in the shower on Youtube, both talent-wise and acoustically. You should definitely take some vocal lessons and practice, practice practice! You should also look into getting a better microphone and insulating your room from both noise and natural reverb, also look into getting some audio production software and learning the ropes of mastering your final sound.
Definitely don't give up, keep trying and one day you might be REALLY good, but unfortunately that day is not today.
edit: Kudos to having the bravery to even try though, I would be very nervous myself!
I'm not trying to dump on you but I can't sugarcoat the fact that this is not very good. You sound l
