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mickey_mouse_the_choking_dog.rtf
Keywords male 1198078, dog 172752, mouse 54432, choking 3065, max 1719, goofy 934, mickey 556, mutilation 496, pluto 192, urban legend 27
Mickey Mouse Turned his red jeep into his driveway,  exhausted but glad to be home, he was looking forward to a relaxing evening at home with Pluto his faithful dog. Mickey turned off the jeeps engine and stepped out. clutching a bone in his hand for Pluto, he opened his front door.  Mickey half expected Pluto to jump upon him. Pluto here boy,  come here boy. Mickey keep calling for Pluto but he didn't get a answer, and that worried Mickey because every time Mickey came home, Pluto would practically knock him down. Mickey was about to go upstairs when he heard a wheezing sound coming from the living room. He walked into the living room and saw Pluto wheezing and gasping for breath  and to his great horror he realized Pluto was choking on something.  Hang on boy.  Mickey rushed to Pluto and attempting to dislodge the item Pluto was choking on. Mickey groaned it had been  minutes since Mickey had found Pluto choking and he still hadn't been able to dislodge the item Pluto was choking on. sighing Mickey carefully  picked up Pluto and carried him outside to his jeep. Hang on Pluto everything will be fine as soon as i get you to the vet. Mickey said while stroking Pluto. Mickey parked in the veterinary  hospital parking lot, hopped out and carried Pluto into the the office waiting room, Doc Pluto needs help right away, he's choking on something and i can't get the item dislodged.  Pluto's veterinarian took one look at him and told Mickey to bring Pluto into the room and lay him on the table.  He took one look at Pluto and said. I am going to have to operate on Pluto, Mickey and it will be a while. Why don't you go home and i will call you after i operated on Pluto okay. Mickey nodded and left a whimpering Pluto at the veterinary  hospital  and drove home. Mickey opened the front door to his house and was about to sit down on the couch to  watch  a horror movie on tv when his cellphone rang. Picking it up he saw it was the vet, and  thought the vet was calling him to tell him Pluto's operation has been a success and answered his cellphone. He was about to say something when the vet said. Mickey you need to get out of the house and get to a friend's house right away. Why do i need to get out of the house asked Mickey? Just get to a friends house right away, i called the police, and they are on there way. hurry up okay. Mickey hung up and ran to Goofy's house. Please let Goofy or Max be home Mickey said as he knocked on Goofy's door. The door squeaked open and Max peeked his head out. Oh Mickey it's you, when i heard someone knocking on the door,  i didn't know who it would be at this hour. What's up? Max is Goofy here or are you by yourself? Yes my dad is here why? I had to take Pluto to the vet because he was choking on something, and the vet just called me and told me to get out of the house and get to  a friend's house. He called the police and i don't really know what is going on. Max led Mickey to the living room and told him to wait while he went to go get his dad. Hey dad Mickey is here, he had to take Pluto to the vet, and the vet called the police and told Mickey to get out of his house for some unknown reason. Is it okay if he stay's  with us. Goofy turned toward Max. Sure Mickey can stay with us as long as he needs too. Goofy and Max walked back to the living room. Hey Mic you can stay as long as you want to. Thanks Goofy said Mickey. No problem Mick. Mickey could the the police sirens go to his house and decided to call the vet and ask what was going on. The vet picked up and demanded a answer. Mickey heard the vet sigh and then finally answered. There was a burglar in your house and the thing Pluto was choking on was three of his fingers, and that's why Pluto was having so much trouble breathing and everything. Thanks Doc Mickey said, and then hung up. Did you find anything out Mick asked Goofy? Yeah I did, it seems i had a burglar in my house and Pluto bit off three of his fingers and that's why he was choking. Wow Mickey Pluto is a hero. Is Pluto going to be alright ask Max? Yeah he is fine. That's good. Max said. It sure is Max, said Mickey. Okay everyone time for bed said Goofy. Mickey slipped under the blanket and smiled, glad  to know Pluto was fine. When he picked up Pluto from the vets he was going to have to take Pluto out for a special treat. Mickey drifted off to sleep with a smile on his face.
 
 
 
 
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A Noble Treat
This is a old fanfiction, i have on DA. This is based on a urban legend called the The Choking Doberman but I am calling it The Choking Dog since Pluto isn't a doberman. It's one of my favorite urban legends and i recommend checking the urban legend out. I hope you enjoy this story. This is my very first fanfiction and i hope this isn't badly written.
 
Pluto, Mickey Mouse, Goofy and Max are copyrighted and  owned by Disney.

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male 1,198,078, dog 172,752, mouse 54,432, choking 3,065, max 1,719, goofy 934, mickey 556, mutilation 496, pluto 192, urban legend 27
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Type: Writing - Document
Published: 10 years, 6 months ago
Rating: General

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EmmetEarwax
10 years, 5 months ago
It telegraphed itself after 2-3 paragraphs. I read the explanation after the story.
The burglar got away but with 3 fingers missing, he'd head to the hospital to treat such a mutilation and they'd be on the watch for such an emergency patient.

The Choking Doberman evolved from an antique legend of a dog who was watching the baby son of a Welsh prince *. The prince came home to find Llewelyn with blood all over his jaws, the nursery in disorder and the baby nowheres in sight. The prince slew the dog -and THEN found the baby, unharmed, behind a cabinet, and a dead wolf elsewhere in the room. The wolf had made to take the baby,but the faithful dog fought the wolf and killed it. Hence all the damage and blood. The prince regretted his haste, for he could not bring the dog back.

The same theme was in LADY AND THE TRAMP, where Tramp ,thought to have attacked the baby (actually he killed a rat), was taken by the dogcatcher and there was a last minute chase to stop the waggon before Tramp could be put down for seemingly killing the baby.

* Wales was never solidly united, but remained petty kingdoms or princedoms. One began splintering further in the 12th century and England had no trouble sequestering the chiefdoms one by one. If a strong ruler united Wales -like Howel Dda, the united realm was divided among sons and no parliament emerged to keep the realm unified.
Wales was, as I said, finally brought under direct English rule to this day.  

(If you knew all this, I apologize).
NevermoreSteed
10 years, 5 months ago
That was interesting, and here i thought the legend originated from Australia.
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