"My friend, the fates are cruel There is no dreams, no honour remains the arrow has left the bow of the goddess"
"My soul, corrupted by vengeance hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation and your eternal slumber. legends shall speak of sacrifice at world's end. The winds sail over the water's surface quietly, but surely"
great one, love your art! And the poem quotes are realy fitting in... you even drew the origin name, witch is even more awesome! i dont thing many people will get this.
just one thing to add, tho this is just my oppinion: Text placement. the tombstone insignia looks a bit off. the lines break on the wrong word somewhat deminishing the impact of the words. my recommendation of implementing line breaks in this text would be as followed:
Toxic Haze caring father, loving husband and loyal guard gone but never forgotten
one more line break, and the others on the right place... quite a difference imo. name stands alone, then come the social/family qualities, then work qualities, or destiny, if you want... then the acceptance of death... and finally the promise to the perished.
just my 2 cents keep on drawing awesome
great one, love your art! And the poem quotes are realy fitting in... you even drew the origin name,
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