Weekend - Page 11 by ZetaHaru < Submission | Inkbunny, the Furry Art Community

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Jancit

12 years, 1 month ago

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Heating up haha ^^

MrAyeSir

12 years, 1 month ago

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Awesome page.
Get well soon!

NaydrxSpade

12 years, 1 month ago

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Wanting to share your body with someone you love would seem like a wonderful thing.

CoopBurrito

12 years, 1 month ago

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I love the comic, Zeta! Get well soon!

maniacalmercury

12 years, 1 month ago

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Man these boys are moving a little too quick x3
But meh... it's a comic...

IgnisWolfbear

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ maniacalmercury

Well the backstory seems to be these boys have known one another for a good while, so it's been long enough ;P

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ IgnisWolfbear

plus half the pages used to focus on their relationship x3

maniacalmercury

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ IgnisWolfbear

Not really.. I mean normally the whole "I love you" "Me too" *sexy time* just doesn't really happen... it makes you look more desperate and shallow then anything... if someone moved that quick on me in real life I'd actually be rather put off by it especially if it was a close friend ibwanted to go further with x3

Tydaze

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ maniacalmercury

"	maniacalmercury wrote:
	Not really.. I mean normally the whole "I love you" "Me too" sexy time just doesn't really happen... it makes you look more desperate and shallow then anything... if someone moved that quick on me in real life I'd actually be rather put off by it especially if it was a close friend ibwanted to go further with x3

It doesn't make you shallow? It's just natural instinct. Moving fast doesn't mean you don't care about someone (if that's what both want)

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ Tydaze

I was going to point out the "instinct" and "if both want it's not weird" part before you replied to him but I didn't x3 so I'll leave my agree with you here ;u;

cracked

12 years, 1 month ago

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This is getting good

RazYoshi

12 years, 1 month ago

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aww yiss

Timril

12 years, 1 month ago

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I hope you feel better real soon and that it doesn't spoil a otherwise fine weekend.
Thank you for sharing this comic, really really thankful that you do

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ Timril

I think I'm not giving up easily hehe, fever and sickness go away one way or another, unless I get crippled I believe I'm going to finish the comic xD and you're welcome!

mikfisherman

12 years, 1 month ago

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Good god this getting hot.

Salmy

12 years, 1 month ago

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Getting even better! And yeah, hope you get better!! Take care of yourself!

And it seems they're not digitigrade anymore, like in the ref sheets. I prefer them plantigrade, so not going to complain! ^^

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ Salmy

I had some trouble with that feet and ended rushing it, leaving it in a way that could look either digitigrade or plantigrade :c I would go for digitigrade and I'm afraid the feet in this page might look like an error now Dx

Salmy

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ ZetaHaru

I still think they look better like this! ^^ Also, don't be so hard on yourself! You draw perfect anatomy, and it's very impressive the enormous leap you made in your art skills in just one year! (not that you weren't very good already a year ago!)

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ Salmy

>w< Thanks salmy... means a lot to me when people recognize such things :3

Salmy

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ ZetaHaru

It is impossible to not recognize it! xD Really, really impressive improvement over very little time.

TidetheCat69

12 years, 1 month ago

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hurray!

Jarylan

12 years, 1 month ago

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Another excellent page. I hope you continue to get better. It's no fun being sick. I sure seem to spend enough time ill to know it! So, please, keep getting better. Worry about your health first!

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ Jarylan

No fun at all Dx b-but the comic ;w;

SneakyPanther

12 years, 1 month ago

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Any particular reason you chose "I felt his thing" instead of something else? There's nothing wrong with the dialogue, it just strikes me as kind of odd. If that came up as dialogue in an encounter I was in, the nerd in me couldn't help but make the snarky remark, "Is that a technical term?" Keep up the awesome work, though! And get better too!

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ SneakyPanther

The word itself have a really wide use and that's what I was aiming for, to let people think and wonder of what Joel in a silly way, named it "thing" in the heat of the moment, it was all inside his mind anyway, he was surely more worried about what was happening outside his mind x3.

Plus I came across this line a week ago and analyzed the resto of the pages and I apparently had to use that word, right there, I can'r remember the reason for that anymore though xD it was probably to avoid repeating words, or that he would identify the feeling later.

FloydMcFly

12 years, 1 month ago

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OwO I'm so glad i found this comic, it's just the thing to sink my teeth into, plus it's just straight up lovely x3 A real crackerjack job indeed ^-^ <3

Voncloud

12 years, 1 month ago

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Theres something about the idea of a smooch -^^-

Evret

12 years, 1 month ago

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The blue one is gayer, thats why hes bottom X3
right?

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ Evret

*whistles*

Evret

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ ZetaHaru

I don't......
what does that mean?
I was right?

lyanscott

12 years, 1 month ago

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*is still just a pile of mush on the floor* oh geez this doesn't even need sex. You could end it with them cuddling and happy and I'd be still be the happiest lion!

My mate just had the same thing. Drink lots of oj!!!! Hope you feel better soon!

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ lyanscott

Oj? =o what's that?
and it's if people think like you do because I was analyzing and there isn't "a lot" of porn scenes, there is like, 3~4 pages can't remember now but it may seem fast paced or with cuts, I'm going to dig my way through this and try to make it seem slower with speeches, but keeping the same page amount x3

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ lyanscott

I forgot this *uses a shovel to put you inside a jar and then put it next to my laptop* ^w^

PrinceEden

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ ZetaHaru

X3 That's Cute! XD

lyanscott

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ ZetaHaru

Well a little love making never hurt anyone! Still think it will be more like love making then porn. Can't wait to see the rest! So awesome!

Oj= Orange juice.

Yay!*presses face against glass to see what is coming up next* front row! Like a lion should be!

ZetaHaru

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ lyanscott

So that's it hehe, I'm getting plenty vitamin C now x3 btw
*whispers* might stream today owo

lyanscott

12 years, 1 month ago

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@ ZetaHaru

Good! Vitamin c is important! And awe... I work too much! I'll catch ya one of these days. Keep gettin better! *swooshes around in jar*

Eyes

12 years, 1 month ago

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I
wish
I could
donate
D:

TheodoreSeville

12 years, 1 month ago

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I am loving this comic, its so adorable and I just love these characters!

If this turns out to be a dream, I don't know what I'd do XD

LostPuppy

12 years, 1 month ago

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This is quickly becoming my favorite comic... I look forward to seeing each new page more and more. Not because it's a yiff fest, but because it's a refreshing story with an adorable protagonist that has more depth than "They fucked and went to sleep."

Thank you for your work and I look forward to seeing more from you.

-FoxAtlas