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She squatted, alone by the river, clutching a tree. She was there because they couldn’t know. She was afraid of what happened if they knew.

She did all he could to keep it a secret. She deepened her voice and made sure to bulk up like her brothers. She acted the way a boy should act and like the things that boys should like.

She gasped out in pain as her body instinctively bore down. It always hurt but it had to be done. One hard push and the first egg fell to the ground.

It was a natural cycle, one that could not be avoided. All egg laying animals did it weather they had mated or not. Every spring the eggs formed inside of her and by the end of May they came out.

There was a few seconds of relief before the second one started to emerge. There was always at least three but no more than six.

She had always known that she was a girl but she didn’t fully understand until she was ten. That was the first time it happened. She had gone to Splinter because of a stomach ache and ended up laying three eggs.

Splinter held her in his arms and comforted her then asked. “Have you had sex with any of your brothers?”

At first she didn’t understand but after a simple explanation from Splinter, she answered, “No.”

Splinter disposed of the eggs and let her sleep in his room that night. He never treated her any differently than the rest, even going so far as to continue calling her, “My son.” Splinter never told the others or gave them any reason to believe that their ‘brother’ was actually a sister.

There was always the fear that her secret would be revealed. It almost happened once, when they were prisoners of the Triceratons. The day they got back she had to run to the river to get them out after holding them in for two days. She had never felt so relieved.

She felt the pressure build and pushed. The second egg joined the first on the ground.

She didn’t know what would happen if they knew the truth. Would they start to treat her differently? Would they suddenly start to desire her? She didn’t want children.

She pushed and the third came out. Each one was easier than the one before it and the fourth came out with little effort.

Squatting there against the tree, she waited. Just to make sure she was done, she walked around for a minute. It wouldn’t be the first time that she thought she was done only to discover later that there was one more.

When she was sure there was no more, she collected the four eggs and dropped them into the river. She watched as they sank into the murky water, something would eat them. She turned on her heel then walked along the river to the access tunnel and headed back to the lair.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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One Shot/Drabble

To get it out of my system.
One of the Turtles is secretly a female but who is it?
It could be any one of them.

Keywords
female 1,062,457, turtle 9,911, tmnt 9,437, teenage mutant ninja turtles 5,989, egg laying 2,303
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Published: 10 years, 7 months ago
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Damgel
10 years, 7 months ago
:3 that was fascinating <3 I really liked it! short but sweet and it really is a mystery as to who! it makes me want to beg for more, but then, I also understand that this was meant to be a one shot and so on. All the same, very good!

~Melissa the Damgel
SadoraNortica
10 years, 7 months ago
If I get enough good feed back with this I might make a follow up where she is discovered. I would just need to decide who it is.
Damgel
10 years, 7 months ago
heh, yeah, deciding who would be the toughest part of writing that story up. I would also be on the fence about it all because in one way or another, they all have some feminine qualities - but then, its like the Yin/Yang - with the male aspects comes the female aspects, and trying to decide whom amongst them all would be difficult. :) but if you do continue this, I can't wait to see who you chose!

~Melissa the Damgel
blackdragonsama
10 years, 7 months ago
oooh i loved this!!!
it's an idea i've been playing with as well, but more on a "was female pre-mutation, but now is mixed gender after mutation" level.
for me it's either raph or mikey.
raph, because overcompensating the male behaviour is amusing and
mikey, because... mikey would just fit the role.  
SadoraNortica
10 years, 7 months ago
They all fit one way or another, it all depends on how you spin it.

I like the mixed gender idea too. :D
blackdragonsama
10 years, 7 months ago
haha that's true.
i can picture donnie being it, too.
leo, for me, wouldn't fit that well, but.. that's really just me XD
mikey n raph are still my top candidates
i also have a thing for gendermessing X3

ARE you going to write a conclusion to this?
SadoraNortica
10 years, 7 months ago
I don't know. I think I can do it in a way to keep the identity of the female unknown. Either that or make a decision on who it is.  
silverspirit
10 years, 7 months ago
OMG! mindblowing!  It really gets you to think.

Maybe it Leo because he's the most responseble and looks after the family, just like a girl.
Or maybe it's Raph, he's overcompensating and acts extra tough and macho because of his secret, but he always had
you back, just like a girl.
Or maybe Mikey because of his innocense, playfulness, jokes, teasing and cookingskills. He's also knows when your sad
and gives you a shoulder to cry on and be there for you, just like a girl.
Or maybe it's Donnie, he's shy and has the softest charecter of all the turtles. He know the human/turtle anathomy and
is mostly he one who quikly understand Splinter's sextalk. He's also the tallest, (almost) all females in the reptileworld are bigger. He is also more mature and takes care of the wounds (after battle), just like a girl.

Aaarrgghh, (headace) please tell me, I want to knoooowww!!! It's a gooood story!!!

(Please forgive my spellingerrors, I'm Dutch)
SadoraNortica
10 years, 7 months ago
I'm toying around with the options on this one. If I get a story straight in my head I might continue it.
silverspirit
10 years, 7 months ago
I hope so, it's really good :)
AwkwardCat
10 years, 7 months ago
That poor girl turtle ): I want tho give her a hug.

Amazing and mysterious! ;D

NalaKwishta
10 years, 7 months ago
this is amazing! I love the guessing game it leaves at the end I had to read it again a few times before making a guess ^_^ I was reading though the comments and people have some good points of it being either Raph or Mikey and to be honest I believe it to be Leo I don't know why but having the idea of Leo being the female pecks my interest He has so much more responsibility then the others so him having that kind of secret would mean much more to try to keep I've been reading so many FanFics but not a lot of people let something like this happen to Leo it's usually the other three unless you count him being almost killed o.O but I don't think you would count that maybe I'm reading to much into this haha great job anyway!! I love it! <3
SadoraNortica
10 years, 7 months ago
lol
It could be any one of them. I think I will continue with it but only if I can keep who the female is a secret. It will test my creative writing skills.
NalaKwishta
10 years, 7 months ago
it's always good to put it to the test ^_^ I wish you luck
AnestheticDreams
10 years, 3 months ago
I have this strong feeling it would be either Don or Leo because of sleeker builds and higher intelligence :)
SadoraNortica
10 years, 3 months ago
Keep in mind that in several turtle species the females are larger than the males. XD
AnestheticDreams
10 years, 3 months ago
Oh geez, it's true! But I was right in it being Don so I'm good either way :). I always assumed that since they mutated into humanoid figures that they would take sizing more after humans and less from their turtle side.
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