I'm guessing you used a Colored Pencil to do the Line work? If so, I recommend using a Fine Point pen when doing your line work, especially if your doing Black on Black. If you look at the side of her head ware you've got her hair sticking out, from a distance, it disappears into the rest of her Hair. By using a Black Ink Pen though, you shouldn't have that problem.
I'm guessing you used a Colored Pencil to do the Line work? If so, I recommend using a Fine Point pe
i never used Colored Pencil just colors crayons and pen yea thats all i really used them lol but later on i stop coloring i just do sketches now some you seen that are colored my girlfriend colored them c:
i never used Colored Pencil just colors crayons and pen yea thats all i really used them lol but la