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One Winged Angels

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Out of Frying Pan...
Thief of Desert Rose
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Dark Serenity
Thief of Desert Rose
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" Once upon a time, there was a one winged pokemon.

He only had one wing, thus unable to fly to heaven

For years he searched for a way to grant him a second wing, to no avail

One day

In the crossroad of destiny, tired and exhausted,

He found a kindred spirit, a fellow one winged angel,

That's when he realized, he was never meant to fly alone

His wing was meant to complete the other's wing and vice versa

Together, they completes each other,

Together, they finally able to fly to heaven,

Together, Forever



A special surprise Valentine Commission for
TatsuyaIchiro
TatsuyaIchiro
from one who don't want to be named

Snow the Shiny Eevee (c)
TatsuyaIchiro
TatsuyaIchiro


Arma the Sandshrew (c)
AkaiKitsune
AkaiKitsune


Commission Details here : https://inkbunny.net/journalview.php?id=120891

Comment and critique is very appreciated^^

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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 11 years, 2 months ago
Rating: General

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CrimsonRiolu
11 years, 2 months ago
You are really sweet you know that?   It's so adorable it's not even funny.
AkaiKitsune
11 years, 2 months ago
Hehehe, thank you^^
TatsuyaIchiro
11 years, 2 months ago
>///< I do not know what to think I wonder who or what? Thank you! Thank you! ありがとうございます!
AkaiKitsune
11 years, 2 months ago
Hehehe XD

Your thanks will be delivered to the mystery guy, Mik-san XD
ThatRedHuskyGuy
11 years, 2 months ago
The cuteness @w@
AkaiKitsune
11 years, 2 months ago
Be careful of your sugar level, the sweetness can be overwhelming~
Zaaru
11 years, 2 months ago
Preeetty pretty good. *-* I really love this drawing! ^^ Is very cute. >//////<
I'm impressed by seeing that you can draw very cute drawings. :3 Keep up drawing them.~

Oh, about the critique!~ I must say that you started using two layers of shading, and in my opinion, it's pretty neat. ^^ It adds "volume" to the drawing and, even if it gives you more work, it's worth it. :3 I think you shoul think more about the focus of the light. It's not that you're having mistakes, but you need to shade more zones. D: It's light there's TOO much light in the drawing. If you don't mind, could I show you how would I shade this? D= Maybe it'll be more useful than just saying these kind of things. x3
Ah! About the pose, I find them very good. The bad only thing I would say is that it seems that they're... "expressionless". I'd add their eyebrows (they're very important in order to make expressions!) or something else, because they seem to be like "=)". They just need an expression that give us (the viewer) the feeling that they're in love. ^^
This is more a suggestion than anything else, but personally I'd draw their noses touching together, since it's always cute! x//3

Anyway, it's a pretty cute drawing! ^///^ I'm glad of your improvements. :3
AkaiKitsune
11 years, 1 month ago
Thank you^^

About the shading... is it really too light? Please, if you don't mind. I can send you the un-shaded one if you wish. I want to see another way of shading of my picture, i am sure it will help. Thank you^^

As for the pose... well, it's true that there is lack of action here. I need to draw more dynamic pose >.<
Zaaru
11 years, 1 month ago
In my opinion, the intensity of the shading is perfect, here. :3 Maybe you should blur the secondary shading layer (the one which is darker) and you could make the shading smoother. :3

Of course. ^^ If you don't mind, I'd like to get it. :3 I'll show you different ways in order to shade it (I use different ones). =3

Don't worry, I'm sure you'll improve the next time. ^^ Just make sure to improve their expressions! x3 They can change the entire drawing.
huzzalt
11 years, 1 month ago
The poem would even make sephiroth cry... it made me cry...
AkaiKitsune
11 years, 1 month ago
W, whoa... I didn't know i can make such a badass Jenova/1st class soldier cry like this, but, Thank you XD
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