It looks fine to me, as I can read it an understand it.
The only tiny issue is in the last panel, last speech bubble where it says, "Only thing we want is..." should be "The only thing we want is..." But even that is fine as I am going by American Dialect of English and not the British or any other Dialect. So leave it as is for it looks fine either way.
It looks fine to me, as I can read it an understand it. The only tiny issue is in the last panel, l
I doubt she'd take the offer... as all she seems to want is approval/acceptance/love... at least in my oppinion. Things she'd not get from the pony she wants it form if she did that. o_O
I doubt she'd take the offer... as all she seems to want is approval/acceptance/love... at least in
true but you must remember that there is still the fact that she may not be completely sure on how to receive such attention in any other way than force..... just saying.......
true but you must remember that there is still the fact that she may not be completely sure on how t
Nightmare don't do this i know Celestia is being a bitch if you go to this dark road again then she will tell Luna that she was right. Prove her wrong and dont join Chrysalis and stop her before she will destroy equestria prove to Celestia that you are a hero and defeat Chrysalis and her minions. Make Luna proud of you.
Nightmare don't do this i know Celestia is being a bitch if you go to this dark road again then she
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