You do actually do the conversation well here. It sounds like something which would actually be said, which is REALLY hard to do. MOst comic dialog ends up sounding... stilted and off, but yours sounds natural.
You do actually do the conversation well here. It sounds like something which would actually be said
I had a lot of fun with the dialog in this comic but it is very hard to get the conversation to sound natural. I originally wasn't going to have any dialog at all and instead just have text on what the characters were thinking, but it came across as quite shallow.
I had a lot of fun with the dialog in this comic but it is very hard to get the conversation to soun
