Please tell me. Tell me how i can make you love me. I had a spell and magic. But it did not help at all. More love. It where more pain, It where more torture. The wait made it the worst. I want it to end this loneliness. With the love from you.
Love me! ... Please ... i beg you ... Please Don't hurt me anymore....
There's several grammatical mistakes that make this kinda hard to read. But they should be easily fixable: "I..I will trying to love "Celestia"." -> "I..I will try to love "Celestia"." "I'm come back!" -> "I'll go back!" or "We'll go back" "It's just change from..." -> "It just changed from..." Hope that helps. :)
I like where this is going... ;) There's several grammatical mistakes that make this kinda hard to
omg all the feels! I can't stop reading!! I LOVE THIS <3
yes, you need to hire an editor for the earlier versions, but... really.... you'd need to be of low intelligence to not understand the comic's plot from visuals alone.
Really, I love this so much, the few grammar imperfections are just a small blip on my radar. I love you for making this <3
omg all the feels! I can't stop reading!! I LOVE THIS <3 yes, you need to hire an editor for the ea
