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Chapter 14 : Love Me!

Chapter 15 : Promoted

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Chapter 13 : Deus vel machina
Chapter 15 : Promoted
To love assailant : Love me!....I beg you.

Please tell me. Tell me how i can make you love me.
I had a spell and magic. But it did not help at all.
More love. It where more pain, It where more torture. The wait made it the worst.
I want it to end this loneliness. With the love from you.

Love me! ... Please ... i beg you ... Please Don't hurt me anymore....

English Editor : rickhol of FA

Another English Editor : DracoBlair of DA

Keywords
mlp 44,685, love 16,004, magic 11,107, filly 3,974, moon 3,831, luna 1,918, celestia 1,237, paper 1,206, nightmare 990, guard 716, royal 693, immortal 203, mortal 86, origami 57, nmm 39, reincarnated 37
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 4 years, 9 months ago
Rating: General

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byter
4 years, 9 months ago
I like where this is going... ;)

There's several grammatical mistakes that make this kinda hard to read. But they should be easily fixable:
"I..I will trying to love "Celestia"." -> "I..I will try to love "Celestia"."
"I'm come back!" -> "I'll go back!" or "We'll go back"
"It's just change from..." -> "It just changed from..."
Hope that helps. :)
Alaskafox
4 years, 9 months ago
Also "As your wish" Could be "As you wish"

And the second quotation mark is missing from "Celestia"
shadowfox79
4 years, 9 months ago
I love it when a story collaboration comes together...
Maybe i should hand out the spoilers sticker more often when i go head cannon :D
LatinoOso1965
4 years, 9 months ago
Very well played here on the direction of this story we shall see something very wonderful.
Sonikkudrawings
4 years, 9 months ago
*Snif*
I *snif* really like how this is going...
Rudan
4 years, 9 months ago
<3 <3 <3 Love this story
Zanerus
4 years, 9 months ago
About the only reason I check this site is for this comic. Love it.
vavacung
4 years, 9 months ago
Oh! Thank! It mean to much for me!
AquaShade
3 years, 10 months ago
omg all the feels! I can't stop reading!! I LOVE THIS <3

yes, you need to hire an editor for the earlier versions, but... really.... you'd need to be of low intelligence to not understand the comic's plot from visuals alone.

Really, I love this so much, the few grammar imperfections are just a small blip on my radar. I love you for making this <3
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