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Chapter 12 : Unbearable

Chapter 13 : Deus vel machina

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Chapter 11 : Finding The Title
Chapter 13 : Deus vel machina
To Love Well-wisher : Your wish well made me hurt.

You wish well to me.
You did not want me to be distressed.
You wanted me to be happy.
You did not want me to suffer because of the gossip.
You wanted to maintain my honor and my dignity .
You wanted me to have a better life .
You wish well to me .... But you never asked my opinion....never cared what I really want.

To see you made me hurt. You called me but not as a friend made me hurt.
Im always beside you. Your always beside me. But I can't love you, it made me hurt.
To know that you love me and do not love anyone else. And I love you, but I cannot love you, it made me hurt.

You loved me .... But why did you hurt me like this ... Why did you torture me like this.
Your wish well hurt me more than anything ....

And it's unbearable now...I can't accept your wish well anymore...

English Edit by : howlingfang of FA

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mlp 49,443, love 17,259, magic 12,763, moon 4,221, filly 4,206, luna 2,075, paper 1,362, celestia 1,337, nightmare 1,129, guard 795, royal 788, immortal 217, mortal 89, origami 56, nmm 39, reincarnated 36
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Published: 5 years, 7 months ago
Rating: General

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Windmutt
5 years, 7 months ago
Dang, you got me on the edge of my seat
vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
Don't be fall from your seat. Story don't end just yet.
DerpyDooReviews
5 years, 7 months ago
hahaha the last panel, the moon thing... all i can think about now is "you like bananas?"
vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
DerpyDooReviews
5 years, 7 months ago
huh not bad, not the funniest comic but it's ok
DarthRandall
5 years, 7 months ago
In two thousand years the guards still have not learned to address her as "Your Majesty."
vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
Because she is Princess not Queen.
DarthRandall
5 years, 7 months ago
But she is a monarch.  That is unless you count Luna who was not around for a thousand years.
vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
Sorry. I don't understand in English to much. I don't know how different between "Your Highness" and "Your Majesty". But I think Your Majesty is for King or Queen.
DarthRandall
5 years, 7 months ago
Celestia's royal status is somewhat confusing anyway.  She calls herself a "princess," which would imply that there is a king or queen from whom she is descended, yet she would seem for all intents and purposes to be a monarch (Luna notwithstanding).  If she prefers to be called a princess for whatever reason, she may also prefer the honorific "Your Highness."  Actually, come to think of it, Mr. Cake did refer to her as "Your Highness" in "A Bird In The Hoof," so that is probably the case.
tkongingi
5 years, 7 months ago
Think about the public the show is written for.

A princess is something that you would want to be.

A queen is something that your mom would be.
vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
Heheh...Maybe Celestia just want herself to look young. Everypony call her Princess, It made herself look younger than Queen.

or maybe It's because Celestia want to share Equestria with her sister Luna. But it will strange if one Kingdom have 2 Queen. So she use Princess.
DarthRandall
5 years, 7 months ago
You may be on to something there.  After a couple of millennia, It would be difficult for even an immortal to not feel old.  Maybe Celestia likes to do little things, like call herself "Princess," so that she can feel more like she is twenty-six instead of two-thousand and twenty-six.
vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
Ohhhhh Yeah!! That's what I want to say!! Never ask a women her age because she don't like to feel old!! >w<
rautamiekka
5 years ago
Over at MLP Wikia someone commented on an Admin's page that in reality, if only a princess rules, it's not kingdom, but something else and actually said what it is. I'm trying to find it.
rautamiekka
5 years ago
PS. The owner of that talk page said something along the lines of 'That is [...]. We follow official [...] here :)'.'

The writer just wanted that the reality should be mentioned, seemingly cuz it's known by any MLP Wikia visitor the show has loads of errors.
DarthRandall
5 years ago
It is a principality, but Equestria bears more of a resemblance to a Renaissance Era empire.  Celestia is a God-Empress in all but title.
rautamiekka
5 years ago
I'm not fully sure it was principality, but what I could google that's closest thing.
LatinoOso1965
5 years, 7 months ago
Very emotionally driven im at the edge of my seat to find out what will happen next. Very well done on the art and the story line bravo.
vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
I will do my best!
LatinoOso1965
5 years, 7 months ago
I know you will do your very best.
appledashing
5 years, 7 months ago
this is priceless!
"she will banish me to the moon" :D
vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
Twilight just being Twilight. Don't mind her.
XxPimpNinjaxX
5 years, 7 months ago
I knew this was going to happen but i was praying it wouldnt
vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
If this didn't happened. Paper will don't know how much Celestia hurt with her wish well.
XxPimpNinjaxX
5 years, 7 months ago
I hope Celestia wont become a nightmare. With her hurt feelings she might go dark
shadowfox79
5 years, 7 months ago
I'm thinking that paper will find celestia sobbing in their old tree house fort or something along those lines...
A place that only the both of them know about and used to play in when they were young fillies.

Of course paper would be all worried about what happened and then they would both apologize and then have a long heart to heart talk dropping the whole status between royalty and peasant and celestia putting her feelings out in the open about paper.  

Followed by a teary eyed lovey dovey scene between paper and celestia (just use a 1/4 of the page panel for the scene)  

And they both return to the castle together at night fall and they get greeted by everyone who were so worried about them..

vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
Should I have to set "Spoiler Alert" here?
shadowfox79
5 years, 7 months ago
If you think my head cannon story idea was on target enough that it is a spoiler .. then go right ahead :)
Zanerus
5 years, 7 months ago
I LOVE THIS COMPLETELY!
vavacung
5 years, 7 months ago
Thank you. It's my honor.
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