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OC data - Jeremiyah / Tariq

Zener the Alakazam - Battle Stance

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G3 : Ebrahim Hasân ad-Şemshyr / Aydın Saltüğar (ابراهيم حَسَن الشمسشير / 𐰀𐰍𐰒𐰄𐰤:𐱁𐰀𐰞𐱃𐰜𐰀𐰻 )
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OC data - Ysaiah / Xehnon
Inner skill :
Chronokinesis. The power to rule over the time.... With this control of time, Jeremiyah can slow it for the foe or accelerate his ally speed, and occasional stop the time for a short period. However even for him and his master of the inner skill he can't go in the future or return in the past. He can trap the foe in a spatiotemporal vortex or limited zone.

Distortion (Distorsiō / Abran [ⴰⴱⵔⴰⵏ])
Distorts the space around the foe and trap it

Labrys of Time (Secūris Temporis / Acaqur n Lawan [ⴰⵛⴰⵇⵓⵔ ⵏ ⵍⴰⵡⴰⵏ)
Speed  the time, summons his labrys and deal several axe cuts and hits in an acrobatic way.

Temporal Impact (īctus Temporālis / Amyewwat Zamani [ⴰⵎⵢⴻⵡⵡⴰⵜ ⵣⴰⵎⴰⵏⵉ)
Freezes the foe's time and deal a series of high-pace axe cuts. then restore the time, making the foe to feel every hits dealt. Immediately after, Jeremiyah focus time's energy on his fist and open his palm wide, trapping and blasting the foe in a clock dial-like explosion.

Background :
Tariq was born inside the clan Madjeranir, in the sandlandic tribe "al-Irifiyyen", as the son of the chief.  Their ancestral territory being annexed, it's only thanks to the chief's grand-grand-grand-grandfather which finalise an agreement with their new sovereigns, that they were not nomad and exterminated.

The deal was to give them a fertile place for their "village", and in exchange the Tribe's members can serve the sovereign as personal malice, private suppliers or royal servants. This deal also protected the tribe from attack, due to be considered as independent estate yet ally of the Emirate. And with time, the tribe showed how useful they were and skilful in the given tasks.

But since some time now, the tyranny ruled the emirate. Due to their efficiency and position, the tribe was enjoying some privilege like be net of tax, or being protected against attacks… as long as they showed their usefulness.  But now, the enough old (and cute) children and women were used as slaves, whilst the adults were hired as assassins or to put down revolts.

Others were farmers, were exploited, forced to work harder to supply food for the pompous royal feasts. To this, the actual emir didn't even bothered to send soldiers to protect the tribe against bandits… they had to defend themselves and the only gesture that the emir did, was to build them a downmarket fortifications.

But despite all this, they didn't revolted, not willing to lose their advantage, plus one day another emir will take the place of the actual one, so... they preferred to wait and suffer than to aggravate the situation.

It's in such atmosphere than Tariq was forced to live, as a farmer and Shepard (although still considered and treated as a prince by his tribe. As the chief's son, they taught him the art of wars, notably swordsmanship.

But as other kids before him, when he was 12 he been summoned to the royal court and be totally shocked of what he has been subject, forced to perform for the royal guests. Yet he was still a high ranked kid (a kind of tribal prince),  and been luckier than the other kids : he had the right of a bath and a meal…  before and after the "show". And Tariq knew it, that only his position have "protected" him.

He was remorseful for his other fellow kids. During is sojourn in the Amir's palace he met another kid, a girl a bit younger than him: "Esrîn Şîlan", She was also the daughter of a tribal chief, and was here as a trophy and hostage. Tariq comforted her and bother became friend. The forced stay of Tariq lasted one whole week… until that, thanks to fellow tribal citizen (member of the malice) which supported Tariq's family, succeeded to bring Tariq a sword and instruction to run away from the place  .

Hiding the sword in a safe place, when the night fell, he started his run away… he wanted to help the other kids, but it was impossible to free them without being spotted. So, reluctantly, Tariq abandoned them, but not Esrîn that he took with him.  They succeeded to escape from the emirate not without killing some guard which spotted them : Tariq was maybe not strong, but using of his size and agility to improve his swordsmanship allowed him to defeat some cocky yet experienced guards.

However, the day after, the Amir been announced that the chiefs' children have succeeded to escape and join Tariq's clan. This, triggered the ire of the Amir which want to attack the tribe, however he been advised do not do so. For two reason: Killing the citizen would deprive him of his favourite meals, killing the chief would deprive him of useful military knowledges and ancestral art that only him knows.

Days passed, and the Tribe's situation became critical due to what Tariq did : Worsening the situation by  challenging the Amir's authority and bringing there one of the Amir's "trophy"… yet, inwardly, his parents were proud of their son. And this one amazed them more in proposing to bring Esrîn to her tribe to made an alliance between the Shaddadid tribe (Esrîn's) and the Irifiyyen (Tariq's tribe) to face their common foe : the Amir.

And thus started the journey of Tariq and Esrîn in the desert, they travelled during one whole days, escorted by Mehdin which already saved Tariq in helping him to escape. Together they joined the Shaddadid and easily formed an alliance with them, and most de facto most of the neighbour tribes.  

When Tariq went back with an army, the Amir was preparing an attack on Tariq's tribe, informed by spies of the incoming coalition. The battle lasted one whole week: the first days were the preparation to push back the Amir's army, then to defeat it and the last day was to entering in the city, capturing the palace and destitute the Amir, lynched by the citizens. The guards have given up when the tribal troop entered in the city, even helped them to join the palace.

This was the first feat of Tariq long chief carrier. When the peace came back, Esrîn, whose the real name was Zerîxan, became oath sibling of Tariq and even closer. Tariq trained her to war and weapon wielding to make her able to defend herself, during ten years to improve their skills, both became the most powerful warchiefs. Defeating eldritch creature as bandits or warlike clans.

Esrîn was Tariq's disciple, sibling, friend and lover. Even if Tariq see her more of his best friend. What happened his first time in the palace been traumatising enough to let no one touch him (at the exception of his parents and occasionally Esrîn). Yet Tariq and Esrîn remained a couple, and it was enough for Esrîn.

However what both ignored is that Esrîn was suffering of a incurable sickness, and one day Tariq discovered it after the doctor asked him if he didn't saw Esrîn. A group of outlaws were attacking isolated village and, too busy to manage the tribe, Tariq send her to settle the issue, trusting in her. And she was happy about it, so she accepted the mission

The doctor revealed to Tariq, with panic,  that any intense or strong effort could trigger the symptom and that he didn't had when the doctor found the diagnostic, Esrîn was nowhere to be found.
Tariq which hanged out with her every day, have noticed something was wrong… but he didn't really inquired… until now. Crazed, he took his horse and immediately joined Esrîn. However the battle has started and Esrîn lying on the ground. Under adrenaline he managed to join her, despite the arrow and the attacks, and the injuries he received… but she was already at the verge of death.
So, in an intense desire to travel back in time to prevent her to go, his inner skill awakened and absolutely confuse and not mastering his power, he been teleported with Esrîn… when he opened the eyes, he was standing in the middle of desert…  holding the dead body of Esrîn : receiving several wound during the battle, he no more struggled to bear the pain and died some minute later.

When Asherah made him guardian, she told him that he have travelled back in time more or less 1200 years…becoming thus the first Guardian…two century before the first guardian (Ysaiah)

With his disappearance and Esrîn's (no one found the body), and as they had no kids… it has been the parents which managed the tribes and decided to became one, founding thus the actual Shaddaïrfiy tribe, one of the most important and powerful faction of the region



--------------------------------------- Background characters ----------------------------------------

Zerîxan "Esrîn Sîlan" of the Shaddadid (زەریخان "شیلان ئەسرین" شەدادی‎ -in Sorani/Kurdish-) (27 year old)
Secound daughter of the chief, Zerîxan was however raised to rule due to the lack of interest displayed by her older sister, Beyan , and the Blood phobia she was suffering… yet the parents loved them both.

The Shaddadid were powerfully warriors and well-versed in the tactics and enjoying a territory naturally protected and hard to take but this time he didn't asked to fix the breach in the main wall, allowing the bandit to enter during the night : Beyan been killed during the raid, and  a part of the city been rampaged. This accident was the fault of her father which thought that no one would dare to attack them. Since this event, the tribe and the chief became even more watchful and the territory's defence increased.

In this way, no one now dared to enter in this no man's land, and the peace remained during years. Overprotected  Zerîxan had nothing to do expert of learn and help her mother time to time.
She was 10 when the Amir's troops tried to control the region, in vain. Every tribe there were redoubtable and the Shaddadid was kinda invincible, pushing back the wave of army with effort.

Frustrated by so much resistance, the Amir decided to send a spy to study the place and if he can, hit where it can hurt. Thus, Zerîxan been captured even if, understanding the situation, she claimed to be "Esrîn" a servant…

It's only the day after that the parents noticed the disappearance of their daughter… and received a message some days later, that they should let them been annexed or they will never see their daughter.

Zerîxan then spend some days in the palace, well treated. This is during her second day there that she met Tariq and befriended and the only one she trusted there.  This is while chatting with her that Tariq knew how useful her tribe could be in his expectation to deliver his kind.

When they escaped she was amazed by the kid's fight skill and shocked by the death of the soldier which made Zerîxan to remember her sister.
Her happiest moments in her life were when she hanged out with Tariq, leaning swordmanship and a personal achievement to have the allowing to do so. She became then one of the most dreaded warriors of the land. But all her intense efforts and injuries she received have created some issue in her body and since some time she was often feeling tired or felt a short pain in her organs. It is why she asked to be examined. At first nothing grave was spotted, and she felt nothing during days. it's only when she started her travel to defeated the bandit that the doctor identified the sickness.

During the battle, Zerîxan been fighting hard and was a bit cocky…. But she was easily prevailing against the bandits. Until that she started to felt the pain again, to cough blood and even if she shrugged the bandits take advantages of it and the villager were unable to save her. Some minute later, Tariq went…

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