Caitlin Kelly is tired of being single. Thinking that she's too overweight, she steals a magic collar that makes her skinny. What will happen once the creator of the collar comes to reclaim their property?
Cute! All the build up here is so much fun! Really like how much suspense you're making for the payoff, emphasizing Caitlin going so overboard and enjoying herself so much. It's great that you can manage tension in your stories so well. It makes payoffs even more impactful when there's a big build up like this!
Cute! All the build up here is so much fun! Really like how much suspense you're making for the payo
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