Ok... Let me begin as many people have told me I am blunt. But as a critic I must begin. One sonic is a male I have never found a male pregnancy very.... Nice. He looks 2d when you were trying to get a 3d. His belly seems to be no it is a perfect circle. It should be a oval at the front of the belly not the middle. Try looking at prey aged women and use that as a model. I enjoy the head over all and the ear rings are a nice touch. But because of its 2d look and belly 2/5.
Ok... Let me begin as many people have told me I am blunt. But as a critic I must begin. One sonic i
Let's see: Your first sentence has no context, goes nowhere, and overall establishes nothing I care about. Your sentence structure and word choices indicate amateurish literary skills, possibly barely passing English. Your Legitimate criticism is drowned in a sea of irrelevant drivel of self taste. To put the icing on the cake, your spelling errors indicates you made this on the fly, which is something a critic should never do.
Verdict: Amateurish, Try Again
Now take the legit stuff and focus on that please, there is no room for shoddy criticism here
Let's see: Your first sentence has no context, goes nowhere, and overall establishes nothing I care
