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Lozar
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Stargazing Big Mac (Mpreg)

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by Lozar
For my new ask blog

http://overduesonic.tumblr.com/

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assigned male 1,206,049, hedgehog 76,308, sonic 62,102, sonic the hedgehog 60,703, mpreg 4,567, male pregnancy 1,933
suggested overdue67, pregnant23,618
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 12 years, 2 months ago
Rating: General

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xFALLENx
12 years, 2 months ago
Ok... Let me begin as many people have told me I am blunt. But as a critic I must begin. One sonic is a male I have never found a male pregnancy very.... Nice. He looks 2d when you were trying to get a 3d.  His belly seems to be no it is a perfect circle. It should be a oval at the front of the belly not the middle. Try looking at prey aged women and use that as a model. I enjoy the head over all and the ear rings are a nice touch. But because of its 2d look and belly 2/5.
Lozar
12 years, 2 months ago
Let's see: Your first sentence has no context, goes nowhere, and overall establishes nothing I care about. Your sentence structure and word choices indicate amateurish literary skills, possibly barely passing English. Your Legitimate criticism is drowned in a sea of irrelevant drivel of self taste. To put the icing on the cake, your spelling errors indicates you made this on the fly, which is something a critic should never do.

Verdict: Amateurish, Try Again

Now take the legit stuff and focus on that please, there is no room for shoddy criticism here
xFALLENx
12 years, 2 months ago
Not prey aged I meant pregnant
emptymind
12 years, 2 months ago
Can we ask things here? Some of us don't have tumblrs.
xFALLENx
12 years, 2 months ago
Still looks weird.
Jellybeanprincess
12 years, 2 months ago
Dat Belly <3
soandowlover35
12 years, 1 month ago
aww sonic
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