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Newcomer alternate version part 1 and 2

Royal splitting pains.
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Keywords male 1221367, cub 288010, dog 176870, dragon 152520, human 110432, paw patrol 5166, spyro 3837
The transition was a jagged wound in Chase's usually ordered world. Ryder was gone, not with a hero's farewell, but with a quiet, unsettling finality. He'd simply stated that the burden of leadership had become too heavy, a weight he could no longer carry. He entrusted the team to Chase, his most loyal, his most dependable. But Chase felt the ground shift beneath his paws. He was a strategist, a protector, not a shepherd for wounded souls.
And then there was Newcomer.
That's all he was. Newcomer. A designation, not a name. He was human, a young man, barely out of his teens, with eyes that held the haunted look of someone who had seen too much, too soon. He was brought in after Ryder's departure, a contingency, a last resort. Apparently, there were protocols, training…preparations for events like this. Events that no one wanted to name.
Newcomer was skilled, Chase had to admit it. He possessed a raw, untamed strength, a tactical mind that could rival even Chase's, and a surprising aptitude for the advanced technology that powered their gear. He was supposed to be their leader, or at least, a co-leader, but he wanted none of it. He performed his duties with a cold efficiency, a grim determination, and then retreated into himself, a fortress of solitude.
Chase, ever the dutiful officer, tried to bridge the gap. He offered training simulations, shared patrol routes, attempted to engage in conversation. Each attempt bounced off Newcomer's icy exterior, leaving Chase feeling like he was barking at a brick wall. He was starting to understand why Ryder looked so tired.
The tension was thickest with Marshall. The Dalmatian, with his boundless enthusiasm and clumsy charm, seemed to embody everything Newcomer couldn't tolerate. Marshall's attempts at friendship – a shared joke, a helping paw, a concerned inquiry – were met with a level of cold disdain that bordered on animosity.
"I don't understand," Marshall whimpered to Chase one evening, his spotted face crumpled with confusion and hurt. "I just want to be his friend. He looks so…sad."
Chase sighed. "I know, Marshall. I know. But he's…different. He's been through…things." Things Chase couldn't even begin to imagine.
The other pups were also struggling. Rocky, ever the inventor, tried to connect with Newcomer through his creations, offering him specialized gear and technical solutions. Newcomer would use them, his expressionless face betraying nothing, but Rocky swore he saw a flicker of something akin to respect in those haunted eyes. It was a slow, arduous process, like chipping away at a glacier with a paw pick.
Zuma, however, had established a strange, unspoken connection with Newcomer. The usually playful Lab seemed to sense the human's pain, his silent suffering. He didn't try to force interaction; he simply…was there. He'd sit beside Newcomer in silence, their shoulders touching, a quiet, unwavering presence. Newcomer didn't push him away, a small victory in itself. Zuma seemed to understand that Newcomer wasn't rejecting him, but everyone.
The truth, a secret Newcomer carried like a lead weight in his soul, was that he was a survivor. He had been trained for this, for the world after the fall. His parents, both high-ranking operatives in a shadowy organization, had drilled him relentlessly in combat, survival, and the use of advanced technology. They had prepared him for a world of chaos and destruction, a world they believed was inevitable.
And they were right.
He remembered the world before, a world of technological marvels and hidden dangers, a world where his parents operated in the shadows, pulling strings he was only beginning to understand. Then came the Cataclysm – a swift, brutal end to everything he knew. He watched them die, their faces contorted in terror as the world tore itself apart. He barely escaped with his life, guided by their final, desperate instructions.
He carried their legacy, their training, and their trauma. He was a weapon forged in the crucible of destruction, and he didn't belong here, in this…this rebuilt world. He was a ghost, a relic of a dead age, and he didn't want to drag these…these pups down with him.
Adding to the already strained dynamic was the presence of Tracker and Spyro. Tracker, the small, resourceful Chihuahua, was his usual nervous self, trying to be helpful but often getting underfoot, much to Newcomer's barely concealed irritation. Spyro, a clumsy, well-meaning purple dragon, had been assigned to assist Skye after her aerial equipment malfunctioned. His attempts to help usually resulted in more chaos, much to everyone's exasperation, except for Newcomer, who simply seemed indifferent to the dragon's antics.
The team was fractured, their usual camaraderie replaced with a strained, uneasy truce. Chase struggled to lead, burdened by the weight of responsibility and the inability to connect with his newest member. Marshall's heart ached with unrequited friendship. Rocky chipped away at the icy wall, hoping for a crack. Zuma offered silent companionship, a lifeline in the darkness. Tracker tried to stay out of the way, and Spyro…Spyro mostly just tried not to set anything on fire.
The question lingered, unspoken but heavy in the air: Could they break through? Could they reach the human beneath the armor of pain and anger? Was it Zuma, with his quiet empathy, or Rocky, with his persistent ingenuity, who held the key? Or was Newcomer destined to remain an outsider, a wound in the heart of the Paw Patrol?
The answer, for now, remained elusive. The storm within Newcomer raged on, and the pups of the Paw Patrol were left to navigate the turbulent waters, hoping that somehow, someday, they could find a way to bring him home.


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The mission had been a bust. A false alarm about some rogue tech in the woods had led them on a wild goose chase, and now, as dusk settled, Chase had decided they'd camp out rather than risk navigating the treacherous terrain in the dark.
The team was scattered around a meager fire, the silence punctuated by the crackling flames and the distant hoot of an owl. Newcomer sat apart, as usual, a dark silhouette against the fading light. Marshall, after a long day of forced smiles and ignored attempts at conversation, looked particularly deflated.
Chase was checking the perimeter, Tracker was huddled nervously by the fire, and Rocky was meticulously cleaning his tools. Zuma had positioned himself near Newcomer, a silent, watchful presence. Skye and Spyro were attempting to get some rest, with Spyro snoring softly (and occasionally emitting small puffs of smoke).
As the night deepened, Marshall found himself unable to sleep. He quietly got up and walked to the edge of the camp, drawn by a need for solitude. Newcomer was there, staring into the darkness.
Marshall hesitated, then, driven by a sudden, desperate impulse, he sat down a few feet away. He didn't know why, but something about the human's quiet pain resonated with his own hidden turmoil.
"It's…it's pretty out here," Marshall said, his voice barely a whisper.
Newcomer didn't turn. "It's dark," he replied, his voice flat.
"Yeah, but…there are stars," Marshall said, his gaze fixed on the celestial tapestry above. He took a deep breath, the cool night air filling his lungs. He felt a strange compulsion to unburden himself, to share a secret he'd held close for so long.
"I…I'm not like the other pups," he blurted out, the words tumbling out before he could stop them.
Newcomer finally turned, his expression unreadable in the dim light. "Everyone's different, Marshall."
"No, you don't understand," Marshall said, his voice trembling. He looked down at his paws, shame washing over him in a cold wave. "I…I'm gay."
The word hung in the air, heavy with the weight of Marshall's fear and vulnerability. He waited for the judgment, the rejection, the disgust he had always expected.
Newcomer remained silent for a long moment. Then, he said, "Okay."
That simple word, devoid of any inflection, surprised Marshall more than any condemnation could have. He looked up, his eyes wide with disbelief. "That's…that's it?"
Newcomer shrugged, a small, almost imperceptible movement. "It's…your life, Marshall. Your business."
Marshall's breath hitched. He had expected anger, confusion, anything but this…acceptance. "But…but I'm ashamed," he confessed, the words tearing at his throat. "I don't want anyone to know. I'm scared of what they'll think."
Newcomer finally met his gaze, and for the first time, Marshall saw a flicker of something other than coldness in those haunted eyes. He saw…understanding.
"I know what it's like to be ashamed of who you are," Newcomer said, his voice low and rough. "To carry a burden you think no one else can understand."
He stood up and walked over to Marshall, his movements slow and deliberate. Then, he did something that Marshall never expected. He reached out and…hugged him.
Marshall froze, every muscle in his body tensed with shock. He had never been hugged like this before, not with this…tenderness, this…acceptance. It was a simple gesture, a brief embrace, but it shattered something within Marshall, a dam of fear and self-doubt that he had carried for so long.
He clung to Newcomer, burying his face in the human's chest, the tears he had held back for so long finally spilling forth. He soaked up the warmth, the solidity, the sheer presence of another being who didn't judge him, who didn't recoil from him.
Newcomer held him, his grip firm and steady. He didn't say anything, didn't offer platitudes or reassurances. He simply held him, a silent anchor in the storm of Marshall's emotions.
When Marshall finally pulled away, his face was wet with tears, but his eyes held a newfound light, a fragile hope.
"Thank you," he whispered, his voice hoarse.
Newcomer nodded, his expression still guarded, but…softer. "I won't tell anyone, Marshall. Your secret is safe with me."
He stepped back, putting a small distance between them, but the connection had been made. A crack had appeared in the wall, and a fragile seed of trust had been planted.
Marshall watched him return to his solitary vigil, a million thoughts swirling in his mind. He couldn't believe it. Newcomer had hugged him. He had accepted him. Maybe…maybe this wouldn't be so bad after all. Maybe, just maybe, there was hope for him, for them, for the Paw Patrol. He returned to his sleeping bag, the warmth of that brief embrace lingering on his fur, a small ember of hope glowing in his heart. He drifted off to sleep with a sense of peace he hadn't felt in a long, long time, his dreams filled with the impossible possibility of acceptance and maybe, just maybe, even love.


But as Marshall felt that he has broke through. Marshall moved across and gently laid beside the newcomer. He can see that the newcomer has fell asleep. Marshall took a deep thought about it. Before he scooped himself a little bit closer to him. Looking around he knew that it was alone at this particular moment. He also knew he was taking a risk. He didn't want to rush things. But he thought maybe if he showed more love towards newcomer the newcomer then will break through.

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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What is the second version of the current story that I'm doing with Paw patrol. This one is more flushed out compared to the previous one. Still the same Samaritans going on as usual. But with a little bit more attention to detail.

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male 1,221,367, cub 288,010, dog 176,870, dragon 152,520, human 110,432, paw patrol 5,166, spyro 3,837
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