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Kit's beginings Chapter 1

My mate and our pet
kit_story.doc
Keywords male 1200304, cub 279401, fox 249489, boy 81202, kitsune 18241, minotaur 2548, minor 562, mino 16
Hunger, that is all he felt as he ran whimpering in pain as he ran through the tree's trying to remember. Not watching where he was going the small silver furred fox kit cried out as he tripped over some roots near a small cliff side over a flowing river, and grabbed a small vine he saw hanging  from the side trying to pull himself back up.

 He screams out in fear as he losses his grip falling into the river thats moving kinda fast. He tries to stay above the water as the current keeps trying to pull him under till he noticed a bit of drift wood float down the river. “whimpering as he moves his sore arms and grabs a hold of the wood using it to stay afloat as he starts to pass out hoping he wouldn't have to feel any more pain.


The small kit floated down the river for days till it emptied into a bigger body of water. His little body somehow miraculously staying with the drift wood as the great ocean moved him for days until finally his small frail body washed ashore one night.

Mino sighed as he waved to the kids and their parents giving them a smile as they left for the day. He looked around getting a weird feeling as he picked up around his home cleaning up the small messes that he and the children had made early. He looked around scratching his head looking around as the feeling got stronger and looked around, “¿Se me olvidó algo?” he asked himself as he finished cleaning.

Grabbing his keys he locks up his home and decides to walk to the beach hoping to clear his head of the weird feeling plaguing him. As he walked the feeling started to get stronger as he reached the beach. Looking around he, not noticing a thing, started to walk down the shore line feeling the sand between his hooves as enjoying the slight warm evening breeze through his fur.

As he walked down the shore he noticed a what looked like a body laying over some drifts wood floating in the coming and going tide as the weird feeling hit him stronger than before. Running towards the body yelling, “Oye, ¿estás bien?” as it floating in and out with the tide the minotaur pulled the small body off of the log and onto the shore out of the tide.

Mino paused to look over the body he had just pulled out of the water noticing it was a young fox. He was amazed as he noticed the kits chest slightly rising and falling as young child breathed and started to shiver.

Racing back to his truck to grab his long duster he quickly returned to the kit's side, and wrapped the large jacket around the small body. Carefully picking the small one up and slowly walking back to his truck laying the shivering cub on the passenger side of the truck before climbing in and driving off.
 
 
 
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First in pool
Last in pool
This is a story been runnin through my head for a long time and finally been able to make real.
I know it's not perfect hehe but this is only the first of many chapters..... Note to anyone who reads this I welcome sujjestions and if i made an error let me know i will will quickly fix it X3
Thanks to Mr.Mino aka oscuridad666 for his help.
oscuridad666
oscuridad666

Keywords
male 1,200,304, cub 279,401, fox 249,489, boy 81,202, kitsune 18,241, minotaur 2,548, minor 562, mino 16
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Type: Writing - Document
Published: 12 years, 2 months ago
Rating: Mature

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oscuridad666
12 years, 2 months ago
I'm speechless. So many thanks *hugs you tight* I hope to read the next chapter soon
KitKizama
12 years, 2 months ago
X3 your welcomes and i know this first ch is small and short but hopefully it will get better with time.
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