From the looks of it, they were using the chain to possibly tighten the machinery but he pulled too hard, breaking a link and making it lash back at him at very high speeds
From the looks of it, they were using the chain to possibly tighten the machinery but he pulled too
If he does fully or partially regain his memory, that could go a lot of interesting ways. He could immediately go apeshit, seek bloody vengeance, seek carefully planned vengeance, or most likely of all: seek out those precious to him. depending on the outcome and what he learns from that could potentially re contextualize many things. What if he was a perfect gentleman to his child and all this happened because of a misunderstanding on his part, and the naive stupidity of his liege? Sooo many ways it could go, there's no way to list them all.
If he does fully or partially regain his memory, that could go a lot of interesting ways. He could i
I've been pretty supportive of the story so far, cuz it's just interesting to see what will happen with him and other stuff, but this large of a time Jump kind of has me waning a bit :/ Hoping that the ending will knock it out of the park 😁
I've been pretty supportive of the story so far, cuz it's just interesting to see what will happen w
15 years passed in the first half of the story. 15 years pass now. Years passing means nothing significant is happening. Unless you want me to waste months drawing filler pages.
15 years passed in the first half of the story. 15 years pass now. Years passing means nothing signi
Oh, I guess I missed the first 15 years? 🤔 I'd say if nothing significant happened over those 15 years, then consider why the time has to be that long? Apart from the "oldboy" ending I think this is possible leaning towards. Why not have the time be shortened to 2 years, and a page with 6 panels covering this just being shots of him working his various odd-jobs, showing signs of age between each panel. Otherwise, maybe have each new section of time introduced through a proxy character? Like follow a Marshtomp's visit to a coffee shop, and him bump into (or be amazed by) our character grinding coffee in the back. And him looking older, being the signifier for the time passage (which, yes, would have to be assumed). Like the first time skip, his plume is more frayed, or sprinkled with greys, or his plates being duller.
I think it's just the definite nature of "here is the textbox with the exact time passed". That there is room their to try something cool (which, might I say, you do great with) or do a "show, don't tell" bit. 🤷
Oh, I guess I missed the first 15 years? 🤔 I'd say if nothing significant happened over those 15 yea
Because Haxorus' minimum average lifespan is 1,000 years. 15 years is nothing to Prometheus. He's not close to 1000. He's not going to have a frayed plume or graying. If I show, don't tell, we'd have twenty pages of filler that doesn't add to the story. Not even written stories describe all the shit that happens in 15 years. I did on the previous few pages. It's just more of that in 15 years. Trust me, dear reader, have faith I know what I'm doing. :-)
Because Haxorus' minimum average lifespan is 1,000 years. 15 years is nothing to Prometheus. He's no
