To celebrate that my final assignment is completed and I have completed my important university assignment, here’s the chapter of my big comic called “Heily’s Redemption”
Prologue:
Heily Revenna Hyena is unfortunately still up to no good, after being told off by her older sister, Harriet Mazi Hyena, to change her ways; Heily unfortunately decided not to listen to the advice. While at the local bar in Wonston, Heily angrily scheming to herself that she will not change as she likes the way she is. She decides to show the others that she will never change and prove that she’s better.
After rallying up Belanca Estellia Husky and Onellla Hilda Cat, they decide to cause some trouble but this would be the thing that Heily would regret later on. They found a railway and decided to trespass on the railway line by climbing over the fence. They also find an unlocked tool shed and picked up three railway picks. After much clanging and swinging, they dislodge the fishplates and after getting a spike fork, they levered the spikes off the rails. Belanca hopes that there will be a train crash in which Heily agrees.
Stephanie The Scarlet Engine is travelling on her way to collect several wagons of coal to take to The Big Yard, she notices that the rails are out of alignment. She calls the driver and fireman to stop, Stephanie tries to stop but she comes off the tracks. Fortunately, Stephanie isn’t going fast but the bent rails will take a long time to be repaired.
Unfortunately for Heily, Belanca and Onella, they don’t realise that The New Strict Controller, Caitlin Lucy Cat, is onboard the guards van on her way to have a meeting with the manager of the colliery. She angrily walks over to discover that Heily, Belanca and Onella are the ones causing the derailment. She orders Heily, Belanca and Onella to meet her in her office when Trap arrives to take Heily, Belanca and Onella and herself to Main Station.
As for Heily, this is the biggest regret she will have.
What happens next? Stay tuned for the first chapter Act 1.
There are 9 separate panels if reading the text is hard to read.
Trivia:
- First content to feature Heily Revenna Hyena, Belanca Estellia Husky, Onellla Hilda Cat and Caitlin Lucy Cat, as an adult female cat, or The New Strict Controller for October 2024.
- The prologue is the build up to Act 1
- The bent rails idea is loosely based on “Thomas Gets Bumped” from Thomas The Tank Engine & Friends
- First comic appearance for Stephanie The Scarlet Engine
Programs used:
- MS Paint
- FireAlpaca
Photo taken and edited by SteamLocoLtMtn
Comic, characters, artwork and watermark created by SteamLocoLtMtn.
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02 Oct 2024 13:04 CEST
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