I re-uploaded my most recent drawing, a slightly modified version without the text and I moved Starlight and Firelight closer together because without the speech bubbles, there is an awkward amount of empty space in between the father and daughter. I did something similar to this with my drawing "Liquid Pride Runs in the Family" over on my DeviantArt page to create a "less is more" effect. While I fully intend on keeping both versions, do you like it better with or without the text? Let me know in the comments.