It's very exciting to see where things go from here! You've been doing an absolutely amazing job with this comic!
It's thoroughly impressive how well you handle the comic medium. You certainly have a talent for handling the flow of action and conversations between panels well. Also you're great at capturing the tone for a scene, the comedy beats with flat colors and abstract background really stand out because your work otherwise is so well shaded and detailed. Plus you do excellent expressions so those shots are hilariously great!
Another thing that really stands out about your work is how well you include text. You're a master of sound effects and things like the burp here really show that off. Likewise the way you do bold for emphasis in dialog works very well. Using different fonts for characters like Red here gives a unique sound too, that's a neat trick!
Speaking of dialog, the character names in dialog balloons to prevent confusion are a nice touch, and it's funny to see "Big D" used there!
Lastly, while all the big bellies, vore, and belching get attention because you make them hot as fuck, seeing Jo-ann, Red and Big D here is a great demonstration of how varied and creative your cast of characters is. It's incredible you can do such a wide variety of species and body types well! It's rare to see people do feral snakes like Jo-ann, it's rare to see people do big bellies as well as you, and it's even rarer to see someone able to do both. And on top of that, you also come up with very unique designs too like Yor'jedath, Becky and Jam too! I genuinely think you have the biggest and most creative cast I've ever seen online! And yes that "biggest" applies in more ways than one~
Thanks again for sharing your work Viro! It's always exciting to see something new from you. Best of luck with all your art!
It's very exciting to see where things go from here! You've been doing an absolutely amazing job wit
Thanks. I think reading stuff like X-Men, Spider-Man, Sonic the Hedgehog, and various other media I've come across since the 90s has helped a lot. One thing I try to keep in mind is that, though there are tons of characters with unique body types as well as supernatural abilities/powers, I still have to take the overall world into account and keep things grounded to a degree. So if a character does something a little too farfetched then there should be a decent explanation for it or enough to suspend disbelief.
As for dialog, I mostly try to treat them as they would realistically. It's easy to just make a character jump at something like the situation that Jo-Ann is in when it comes to money, but to me, it's more interesting to have such decisions weigh on them first before committing. So even if we know what choices she's going to make, it's good to see her think about it or come up with excuses to whether on not it's good or bad.
Still have a lot to get better at with the artwork, but glad people like the characters even if the theme(s) aren't their jam.
Thanks. I think reading stuff like X-Men, Spider-Man, Sonic the Hedgehog, and various other media I'
Yeah, Jo-Ann needs to really give this some careful thought. And she shouldn't neglect bringing her housemate in on the deliberations as well. After all, this is something that will definitely impact their relationship in the long term. In a strictly legal sense, if their society allows suicide, she's covered as a biological suicide apparatus, as long as all the appropriate legal documents are filed ahead of time.
With that covered, they could even script things to appear as a non-consensual act and be covered as far as general distribution goes. Hmmm... come to think of it, if the state supports capital punishment, the studio might be registered as a legal execution facilty. I imagine they could make a whole series with her dressed in an executioner's hood or simply Goth makeup with a lines of temporary skull tattoos keeping her meal tally for fans.
Yeah, Jo-Ann needs to really give this some careful thought. And she shouldn't neglect bringing her
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