Ha! "Little helper." Like Zeus's "Chalice bearer." No one says it, but we know. I hope he gets more of the "Uh...heheh,, yeah" treatment from her. Maybe the 'little helpers can help there too?
Ha! "Little helper." Like Zeus's "Chalice bearer." No one says it, but we know. I hope he gets
That SCOWL is so good. The little touch of jealousy. I love the way you continue to move the story forward too, and how it's felt and told by the CHARACTERS rather than railroaded by a spoken narrative. You use show over tell excellently.
That SCOWL is so good. The little touch of jealousy. I love the way you continue to move the story f
