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Arrr! This be a tale about a young pirate setting out for treasure, but ends up dropping anchor early and then has to swab the poop deck.

This comic took a lot longer than I thought, but has served as a rigorous warm-up to more finished work.
Conceived mainly by the same one responsible for
Charlie Capybara's Play Palace by POOMPYBOONTY
and
The gift that keeps on giving by POOMPYBOONTY
+5
and
Class Kangaroo by POOMPYBOONTY
+8

with myself as illustrator and co-writer.

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male 1,194,436, horse 59,442, scat 15,406, poop 9,957, traditional art 8,508, pooping 6,986, donkey 6,138, pencil 5,122, messing 3,362, soiling 1,646
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Type: Comic
Published: 1 year, 9 months ago
Rating: General

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unknown809
1 year, 9 months ago
YIPPIE JARRS BACK
Betowolf
1 year, 9 months ago
don't just use toilet paper. get the poor fella to the showers! D:
Reizinho
1 year, 9 months ago
I just love your traditional coloring, holy shit.
POOMPYBOONTY
1 year, 9 months ago
All I see are shortcuts. I think this got me to hate colored pencil, or the paper I did it on. I have some ideas on how to improve my coloring.
Reizinho
1 year, 9 months ago
The story is also nice. His friends are pretty sensible. I also like that the scenery changes to reflect their pretend play. I wonder why I have never done that.
POOMPYBOONTY
1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks, I'm glad you notice that. We also enjoyed the idea of seeing friends that are more concerned, first and foremost. I mean that's what friends would do at a drop of a hat, after all...

I forget where I got direct ideas for the environmental changes, but I'd like to take the time to further praise manga artist Nobuyuki Fukumoto, best known for Kaiji (Now English dubbed, apparently!?) and Akagi! :D waves and bows to others reading this comment right now. His visual metaphors always were really interesting.
Reizinho
1 year, 8 months ago
And the words the narrator says in Akagi. I prefer the original dubs. The voices are much better.  I find North-American dubs to be too cartoony. Brazilian and Japanese dubs sound better, but that's a matter of personal taste.
POOMPYBOONTY
1 year, 8 months ago
I sort of know what you mean about NA's dubs being more cartoon-y. I guess it does all depend on the series and voice acting direction/talent etc etc, sometimes there are anomalies.
SnowtheBear
1 year, 8 months ago
Always love your use of expression and body language.
POOMPYBOONTY
1 year, 8 months ago
Aw, thanks a bunch. I've recently become critical of the use of dialogue in sequential art, and felt like I should see if I could do without it as much as I can. The benefits are immediately apparent if you ask me.
SnowtheBear
1 year, 8 months ago
It might be fun to try some pictorial dialog like this https://www.furaffinity.net/view/37428011/
TorinDarkflight
1 year, 8 months ago
It's a small detail in the grand scheme of things, but I REALLY love the closeup of his tail lifting. The exact moment he gives in and decides to let it out...lovely!
POOMPYBOONTY
1 year, 8 months ago
Ohhh thank you! I'm glad you noticed! I know that's a very specific indicator of what's happening, and tail action (and ear action, or whatever other animal parts) are great for body language hehe.
CacabungusNoah
1 year, 8 months ago
Glad to see you back Jarr: Loved the small history remembers me  some RP's. Hehe the back ground could be the "playground".
:-)
POOMPYBOONTY
1 year, 8 months ago
Aw thanks Noah ^^ I really appreciate it. And yes I do think of a certain park when I think of what we see here hehe! It's a lot like it. I am glad you and lots of others like seeing it hehe.
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