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Dialogue / Script / Panel layout by : Twilightstormshi
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once again a page that took forever x.x

Keywords
male 1,109,121, female 998,907, dragon 138,410, pony 102,194, mlp 67,566, my little pony 62,069, unicorn 28,855, my little pony friendship is magic 24,526, pegasus 20,102, mlp:fim 12,521, earth pony 12,150, twilight sparkle 8,367, mlpfim 8,363, rainbow dash 6,547, mlp fim 6,094, spike 6,086, pinkie pie 5,835, applejack 5,657, my little pony: friendship is magic 5,283, vinyl scratch 1,126, dj pon-3 318
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Type: Comic
Published: 11 years, 6 months ago
Rating: General

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smileyzrevenge
11 years, 6 months ago
FIRST lol jk
good stream kitsu
judgeseven
11 years, 6 months ago
you got first dang.
it was a good stream and it turned out good
PrysmTKitsune
11 years, 6 months ago
question....can a dragon actualy 'get' drunk, or would his internal fire burn the alcohol off before it got the chance?
kitsuneyoukai
11 years, 6 months ago
assuming he has a flame sack or something, i dont think it'd be a problem, since it'd just bypass it or whatever.
would suck if he got a message while drinking though, fire everywhere =l
PrysmTKitsune
11 years, 6 months ago
LMFAO picturing that*
Dragonlord354
11 years, 6 months ago
ROFL CX
Juria316
11 years, 6 months ago
ROFLMAO! Great mental picture! :D Seriously, the way this comic seems to be heading, yeah, almost a guranteed drunken orgy, not that that's a bad thing. ;)
PenelopePossum
11 years, 6 months ago
I use alcohol as my fuel source!
nasthedarkone
11 years, 6 months ago
of course us dragons can get drunk.  our fires r not trule in our bellies, most of us have what could be termed a 'flame sack', basically its like a crop where methane gas builds up which is produced by bacteria in our stomachs and ignited by whats called the 'thimble', its a formation (that looks and feels much like the wall of a thimble) on the roof of the mouth that contains electricity producing cells.  because these cells r close together, they arc, and that ignites the methane gas when we breathe it out.  Spike is a little unique though, his fire is pure magic, thats how he can send messages by burning them.  either way, he can get drunk
KiraCaroso
8 years, 6 months ago
I love how you made the explanation so scientific, so nerdy, it is my language.
DethStryke
11 years, 6 months ago
Getting fairly awesome. More awesome than awesome.
SpaceShipEarth
11 years, 6 months ago
I bet spike knows what applejacks tastes like XD
Nopast
11 years, 6 months ago
i believe that the next few pages might all take a lil longer now x3
ruink
11 years, 6 months ago
fun couple of streams, sorry you had to go through hell though
Wakka
11 years, 6 months ago
A page that took forever but a page with awesome details. this pic is amazing. ^^_
Yurusa
11 years, 6 months ago
I keep hearing about some stream what about a stream?
elderflowerpudding
11 years, 6 months ago
kit always does one when he's coloring a page. should be in your notices if you watch him!
CodieCub
11 years, 6 months ago
Question, btw loving the art, but does AJ have to sound like such a "tard back water hick" no offense but is it specified by
elderflowerpudding
elderflowerpudding
that she must remain the idiot of the group and talk like a stereotype Texan?
elderflowerpudding
11 years, 6 months ago
this was actually addressed here.

basically, i don't intend offense; it's just an attempt to make the language easier to read in her voice. i think you'll find the actual things she says aren't stupid. in panel 3, she may not understand what pinkie's talking about, but that's cuz pinkie's keeping secrets. aj then says something observant about the group as a whole in that same speech bubble. later on this page, she's proud of her cider, but that doesn't make her a country bumpkin. she legit grew those apples. i don't think of the drawl as making her a "tard backwater hick," and neither does mlpfim, in which she does talk like a stereotypical texan. i mean, she sounds country. that's the point of the accent she actually does have in the show oO i'm just mimicking that and don't think i'm being any more callous towards her than the show is. in fact, i think neither i nor the show is being callous towards her at all. she's a likable, developed character.

if you have suggestions for how i do the drawl itself or on how to deepen her character, i'd seriously be happy to hear them.
CodieCub
11 years, 6 months ago
Well being a southerner my self it is a bit easier for me to give a suggestion of speech for a southern drawl.
In basic, the use of "Ah" instead of the letter "i" is a bit harsh, mostly due to the way it is read, most people would more than likely over enunciate the "ah" in the way a person would if they were reading a surprised manner, or probably in the short sense that its more like "ah i get it now" but in the actual MLP-FIM show AJ actually uses the word "I" instead of going for deep southern drawl by using "Ah" but the way she uses it it be more like "Aye" instead, so if she was thinking and agreeing with someone she would say "Aye reckon" instead of "Ah reckon" you get me?
One more thing to be said the dialogue (using the one on this page as an example) can change ever so slightly like so;
Well aye don' rightly(rightly is used more than right down here) know watch'ur talkin' bout there Pinkie, but'chur (these you got spot on) idea sure is fine with me. Aye just think you'd better ahsk (ask spelled like that to emphasize the "a" sound) the rest of the gurls (the girls spelled like so to emphasize the "ur" sound) after me, if'in aye know anythin' uhbout (about spelled like that to put emphasis on the "a" but pronounced more like "uh") this group!"

A slight change makes all the difference but this is just my opinion, not  gonna lie, loving it so far, it is just that AJ's part was a bit hard to read for me and I had to re-read it several times to grasp it all, but it might just be me.

Hope this helps ~Codie
elderflowerpudding
11 years, 6 months ago
thank you for the tips! they definitely help, and you'll see them from now on in aj's speech
CodieCub
11 years, 6 months ago
No problem, glad I could help ya' out a lil ^^
sgtnolisten
11 years, 6 months ago
"It's just as sweet as your apples!"   >.>

*Slaps self* Gotta get my my out of the gutter more often. That sounded like an inuendo!
elderflowerpudding
11 years, 6 months ago
definitely intentional
Coop
11 years, 6 months ago
Think he means HER apples. Between her legs
datcatty
11 years, 6 months ago
Crotch-tits!
Coop
11 years, 6 months ago
yes those apples ;)
GreenFur
11 years, 6 months ago
Horse Apples = horse poop, considering how many apples AJ eats, Spike may be on to something here.
--GF
Muddypaws
11 years, 6 months ago
Though passing Apples through into Road-Apples may indeed be part of AJ's fermenting process for the Cider.

Spike (Later): " *HICK* Heeeyy.. aPPleJacks... *Hiick* ThisshShydertasteslikeshit!"
GreenFur
11 years, 6 months ago
ROFL!
good one, perhaps that may be one reason for the drawl....
--GF
Muddypaws
11 years, 6 months ago
Oh... I see some real "Frisky-Business" at this party, once Spike gets good and tanked.
Tacoart
11 years, 6 months ago
dat dj poker face :3
VioletEchoes
11 years, 6 months ago
i am foreseeing an orgy...just think about it, we have club music, spike getting drunk and a bunch of mares in heat...
Omegajack
11 years, 6 months ago
...do I smell incoming orgy?
Ouros
11 years, 6 months ago
Heh, I'd like to be the next script writer if you'll be looking next time! ;) 8'D Keep going! :D
fastspeed
11 years, 6 months ago
Spike is going to get drunk then have a sexy time with everypony there even DJpon3
Padrinino
10 years, 7 months ago
Anyone thought "Cupcakes!"? LOL
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