5 things i like about the drawing: - rimlight looks good - position of fingers looks believable i think - volumes of the main muscles & fat are clear - proportions look mostly like i want them to look like - line art has dynamic thickness
5 thing i want to improve on: - the arm should probably be thinner so that the volume of the thumb stands out more - putting more thought into where the light source(s) and shadows are - i think i like paws with fingers which have 2 joints more than 3 joints so i wanna practice those more - i think the big bean shape of the hand looks probably better if i draw it first (as a secondary shape) and only after that (if any) tertiary stuff like folds - the direction of the claws looks to me like i should've put more thought into how they indicate the perspective of the finger tips
