Dialogue / Script / Panel layout by : Twilightstormshi --- This comic is continued and added to by donations! consider donating! :b https://inkbunny.net/journalview.php?id=36797 --- We're back on track! =b i'll try to be sure to get a page done every 3-4 days.
I know it's a minor gripe, but this page seems a little disjointed when taken with the previous one. The last thing we see in page 12 is Spike walking out of Sugarcube Corner alone. Here, he's suddenly fast asleep with Twilight carrying him to meet with Rainbow Dash. Was something supposed to happen between that?
I know it's a minor gripe, but this page seems a little disjointed when taken with the previous one.
yeah, a walk to a picnicking spot near fluttershy's house. =P i see where you're coming from; asked kit to add something to make the transition a little less dirty. it's probably not the best decision artwise, but i want to keep up the fast pace of the comic so that we get to all the mane 6 before donations dry up. if we finish this comic's plotline and still have enough in donations, though, we'll do a sequel.
yeah, a walk to a picnicking spot near fluttershy's house. =P i see where you're coming from; asked
