Sorry for the radio silence folks, been going ham at this comic since February. It's a short 9 page comic and a direct follow up to the previous comic I have here. It's gonna be published in May.
this is very, very good. excellent drawing and bold choice to mix three languages. i have found one typo, in the 3rd page, 5th panel: "where you told". also: i chuckled at "martora" in 4th page is a nice detail. can i look at this as a second chapter of a longer story? 'cause you really picked my interest.
this is very, very good. excellent drawing and bold choice to mix three languages. i have found one
Dang.. and I ran it by three other people and still missed that one lol.
Yeah I'm really proud of the "martora" pun, even saved the original drawing to make a colour avatar out of it. It was honestly my fav moment doing the comic!
And yeah, I want to continue this, got a bunch of ideas for it. Incidentally (and it's not shown here), it's 4 languages, Gris (that wolf rough handling the poor guy while drinking beer) speaks with a german accent, tho that only showed up a bit in the first comic.
Both are B&W and short because they're published on a local fanzine here alongside the stories of my friends (tho the stories are unrelated).
Dang.. and I ran it by three other people and still missed that one lol. Yeah I'm really proud of t