The True Story Of Hansel And Gretel - Part 4 - Gretel Wins
By ChubbySong321
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Gretel got a proud, smug, smile on her face and Hansel huffed as he pouted, pushing out his hands, as fists, at his side as he did so
“Ha! I win. I get to eat her~” She teased her twin brother, patting her massive, fat-kid, belly
“Grrr! Well…I still get to eat the house~” Hansel retorted back as he stuck his tongue out at his victorious sibling
Needless to say I was terrified. I didn’t want either of these bloated children to eat me. I did my best to get up and run away. However, the oven’s flames had drained me of all my strength. I could only wiggle slightly and that wasn’t doing anything to help me avoid becoming a snack
So, there I laid, now only able to watch as the chunky brother began to eat down the rest of my home. The house I had put so much work, expense and love into building. Now it was being wolfed down so some fat, greedy, little, boy could fill his obese belly up all the more
However, as painful as this was to witness, it was nothing compared to what I was about to view next. I peered up only to see an exposed, big, round, bloated, little-girl, belly growling above me. It was only when I looked up a bit further, past the massive stomach, that I could see the face of Gretel drooling over my cooked form
“Yummy! You smell like candy. You’re gonna be SOOO tasty!” She said with a lick of her lips as she gave me a sniff, taking in my cooked scent
I shivered in place upon hearing this. I closed my eyes and hoped things would get better. I hoped I would wake up from this horrible nightmare. I hoped this would all just go away. However, all I heard were small, but heavy, footsteps coming over to my upper body
Foolishly, I opened my eyes just in time to see my head being shoved into Gretel’s wide-opened mouth! I could only let out a shriek at this, but all I got for my efforts was a little snicker from Hansel who, I could still see fairly clearly, was currently eating all my hard-candy plates
It was the last sight I got before Gretel’s mouth closed over my head and I lost any vision of the outside world. Now all I could see was the inside of Gretel’s maw and the tongue that tasted me. My roasted, candy-coated, face got an audible “mmm” from the chunky girl before she continued eating me down
I was soon on the move. My face was now getting crushed by a large, pink, tube. If I had to guess, I would say this was her throat. I can’t be sure though. I may be a scientist, but biology was never my strong suit
Whatever it was, I wasn’t allowed to stay there long as the fat, greedy, girl continued to eat. I could feel her grubby, little, mouth tasting, and slurping, all over me as my head moved into her stomach. As I said, I’m no expert when it comes to anatomy, but I knew this was her belly. For 1 thing, it was huge! It was much, MUCH, more specious than her throat had been. Not only that, but I landed in large amount of chewed up candy, as well as an acidic liquid that burned to the touch
I, once again, wasn’t given much time to dwell on this as the horrible, obese, brat let out a massive burp! The rush of air jostled me about in her gut pretty good and caused the walls of the flabby stomach to constrict around me, lightly crushing me. Worse yet, I could clearly hear the, obese, little girl say,
“Wow! That was HUGE!” With happy amusement at her belch before she slapped her tummy, inadvertently hitting me in the face, although not hard enough to REALLY hurt me
No, the stomach acids would do that. I could feel them slowly creeping up my form. I did my best to avoid them, but I couldn’t really move all that much. They just kept inching further, and further, up my body. I could only let out a frustrated scream as I punched at the walls holding me tight, which only netted me another, light, burp from the child. It was clear my struggles hadn’t come close to hurting her, let alone helping me escape her stomach
So, here I now sit, telling you my horrible tale. Please, you’ve got to help me! I can already feel more chewed up candy falling on my head. The gluttonous child must’ve joined her fat twin in eating down my house! The stomach acids are already up to my neck and it will soon be over my he…
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..So the 2, lost, starving, kids finally got rid of the evil witch who tried to starve them and not let them have any of her yummy candy. They could now eat all the yummy gingerbread house they wanted. So the 2, really-cool, kids gobbled up the yummy gingerbread house and, even though her dorky brother got to eat most of the house, the cute, pretty, Gretel got to eat the last couple of bites of it. It was so yummy
Then the 2 kids found their way home, thanks to Gretel, and had a nice, big, dinner. It was cheese burgers and fries and milkshakes and pie because mom said they were so good and were gone walking for so long and got in so much exercise today. It was really yummy too and Gretel out-ate her dumpy brother and made the biggest, best, burps ever. It was super adorable
And they both lived happily ever after
The End
