“Bettur do a good job ur ya gonna git’ it pardnur.“
I’m assuming the “none” southern/western accent translation is “Better do a good job partner or you’re going to get it.”
If so, that sentence really should be “Bettur do a good job ur yer gonna git’ it pardnur.”
ya=you
Yer=your and you're
Also you may wanna think changing ur just back to or, first thing i thought when i saw it was that it was text speak for "your". When writing in accents sometimes you have to make sacrifices to make the sentence make sense. And if you ever listen to a person that talks with an accent like that, they'll make those corrections in there speech patterns themselves, when need be.
I hope this helps, I cant wait to read more!
Also you need to work on your accents a bit. “Bettur do a good job ur ya gonna git’ it pardnur.“ I
This is true, but you got to take into consideration: he's not a well versed actor xD Tod's just a porn star :P it's possible even he doesn't fully know the accent or how to fully play the part himself. You have a valid point but you just gotta take all possibilities from all angles, there's always going to be a different take on a scene and the language used in it :)
Also yes, we're aware of the typo it IS supposed to have 'seem' included and as soon as Easyspark has the chance to, it will be fixed :)
This is true, but you got to take into consideration: he's not a well versed actor xD Tod's just a p
Ah okay XD i just saw that, and it made my eye twitch.
As for the porn star, yeah i took that into consideration, thats what i didnt mess with "pardnur" even in bad westerns i've never herd that one XD But good to know :3 thanks for typing me back.
Ah okay XD i just saw that, and it made my eye twitch. As for the porn star, yeah i took that into
always appreciate helpful criticism when it comes to the story/script and also clarifying anything that may be questionable if someone doesn't understand it or misconstrues it :)
always appreciate helpful criticism when it comes to the story/script and also clarifying anything
