(MaM) Pretending To Make Babies - Page 01

(Part 1) Babysitting and Babymaking Page 1

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by FeatheredAdventures

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First in pool

Marine And Mint

11 in pool

Last in pool

This is just a dry run to see how quickly I could draw a comic page that had been outlined ahead of time, and if I could keep things consistent while doing each panel.  It took about 5 hours to make this and the fact that it's rushed shows.  I will most likely redo this once I've gotten the full outline completed to this story.  If I go through with this first comic page I only really plan to start doing one page a week.  I also plan to draw a few pages ahead in order to make sure nothing gets rushed.  This comic is only looking to be about 12 to 14 pages, I kind of want to keep the stories short and sweet without relying to heavily on a major narrative.  This isn't a webcomic, just nice set pieces to enjoy yourself with.

I may also start a funding campaign for this too in the future.  The more funds I can raise for this the more pages I can put per week (or at least that's the plan).  There are still a lot of details I need to work out first and may make a journal about this in the future.  What do you all think of this first page?  Does my comic enterprise idea intrigue anyone?  Feedback will help with comic production as well.

Update: Fixed some detail issues and other things that I missed.  It looks a lot better now though I'm not sure anyone will really notice the difference.

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Type: Comic

Published: 3 years, 9 months ago

Rating: General

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Gildedtongue

3 years, 9 months ago

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Fantasy Empires was an amazing game!

And this is starting out as a very nice comic!

FeatheredAdventures

3 years, 9 months ago

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@ Gildedtongue

Thank you for your kind words, it means a lot starting out on this venture ^v^

I was wondering if anyone would recognize the game, it was something I played often on my dad's old pc. The game itself was given to me by a friend who wanted to get rid of some old cds. The collection included Wizardry 6, 7, Fantasy Empires, and the one last game that I can't remember the name to. It had a unique look and gameplay style, kind of like war craft but with a 2.5d front look instead of an over the top look.