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[VN] AULLOLC TS-08

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[VN] AULLOLC TS-07
[VN] AULLOLC TS-09
Project Visual Novel : An Unexpected Love Life Of Little Changeling

*M = Main
*U = Unicorn
*TS = Twilight Sparkle

Title Scene : https://inkbunny.net/s/1980559
Previous Scene : https://inkbunny.net/s/2162337
Next Scene : https://inkbunny.net/s/2173152

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male 786,160, female 667,783, mlp 55,170, comic 48,088, unicorn 21,522, twilight sparkle 6,705, changeling 4,084
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 2 months, 1 week ago
Rating: General

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manicMagician
2 months, 1 week ago
Ayyy, it's going...sort of well? We aren't dead at least
RepSouls
2 months, 1 week ago
Hey, this worked out as well as it ever could have.  Great writing here.
Blackraven2
2 months, 1 week ago
And the Oscar for "comic with most re-uses of the same drawn panel in a row" goes toooo ...

*opens envelope - suspense increases*

vavacung
vavacung
Lazypants in AULLOLC TS-08 !!!!

*the audience is going crazy....*

If there had at least been a itsy bitsy tiny alternation in face expression... maybe with some back & forth ... you'd have totally gotten away with it.

vavacung
2 months, 1 week ago
Someone don't understand the nature of visual novel...
Blackraven2
2 months, 1 week ago
Heh, I would likely not even have noticed if the text and the face expressions hadn't been at odds with each other.

Obviously a visual novel you can repeat and reuse panels, especially in a dialogue situation. But I think you overdid it.

You can't write "Twilight stood back up" but then have 5 more panels with her still sitting down on her haunches - or mention how her mood changes in the text, yet keep repeating images of the exact same face expression.

Or well, you can. Obviously. You just did. But then the people start noticing and you get sarcastic comments, like mine.

I'm not gonna stop watching or reading your work because of that. But I do give sarcastic comments. That's just what I do.

You didn't do that in any of the previous installments (and yes I did go back and checked). There was always a little bit of variation to matches what was happening, whenever needed.

Did you run out of time for this one?
vavacung
2 months, 1 week ago
I don't  run out of time. I intents for it to be this way. Like I said. This is how visual novel normally be. It's not comic.It's novel with illustration.
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