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Dylan's Aftermath
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I bet most of you didn't expect another page of this comic right? just thought I'd practice more anthro, is it an improvement over the previous page?

Gretchen The Librarian character belongs to
HazardDan
HazardDan
, https://www.furaffinity.net/user/dannydukehazard/

I thought It would be fun to draw her in this confrontation with Delilah after obviously doing what she did with Dylan, anyway how has my anthro art look in this page, I hope it looks better than before

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male 1,120,630, female 1,010,518, canine 175,695, dog 158,606, age difference 24,740, dalmatian 9,568, huge boobs 6,222, 101 dalmatian street 3,392, dylan dalmatian 525, delilah dalmatian 256, gretchen dalmatian 2
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 3 years, 12 months ago
Rating: General

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xephion
3 years, 12 months ago
i think is better but i cant be a good critic on this case i love your feral characters and not interested in your anthros, too much boobs but i think it looks better
HyperGal
3 years, 12 months ago
you're right, ferals are my strong suit instead of anthros
xephion
3 years, 12 months ago
i was not saying this to discourage you if you like your anthros keep going its just my taste
OutrageousBehavior
3 years, 12 months ago
I'm definitely digging anthro Dylan.
Ragnacock
3 years, 12 months ago
I  much prefer your anthros over your ferals. I absolutely love your art style though regardless of the topic.
Dylan142
3 years, 12 months ago
buy the look of delilah she not too happy with the librarian for having fun with dylan
HyperGal
3 years, 12 months ago
and Dylan is all tired from the looks of it
PurpleDragon2000
3 years, 12 months ago
You did a great job in both pages with them so don't worry that much.But one major tiny thing is Delilahs neck is too long compared to the previous page lol.Also DAMN those Huge Milf Boobies
HyperGal
3 years, 12 months ago
So which way looks better for Dylan and Delilah?
Should I do the neck size somewhere in between?
PurpleDragon2000
3 years, 12 months ago
To be honest their necks in the first page look more natural but in this its a bit on the long side
HyperGal
3 years, 12 months ago
It felt a bit short and stumpy though, and didn't exactly look like Delilah in a way if that makes any sense
Maybe next page something more in the middle
PurpleDragon2000
3 years, 12 months ago
I guess you can't adjutst the neck size a bit here now right?
HyperGal
3 years, 12 months ago
I could technically but the page is finished and there's technically nothing "wrong" like broken dialogue or someone miscolored, just the neck a bit higher
PurpleDragon2000
3 years, 12 months ago
Well its your call on what you want to do so
HyperGal
3 years, 12 months ago
what do you think of it now?
PurpleDragon2000
3 years, 12 months ago
Looks great but the inside of the collar could be a darker blue so it doesn't mix with Delilah's fur if you want to do it like that regardless of the white lines there.Also sorry for the late reply I didn't think that you would adjust it or anything.Btw something that I noticed after I wrote this is one line going in Delilah's ear
HyperGal
3 years, 12 months ago
and this is why I dont do edits after a drawing is finished
PurpleDragon2000
3 years, 12 months ago
Sorry guess I should have kept my big flapper shut
HyperGal
3 years, 12 months ago
it's fine, i'm just annoyed at myself
PurpleDragon2000
3 years, 12 months ago
I tried and fixed the line in the ear and touched the other ear as well but not really sure how to send it to you to see if you like it or not
HyperGal
3 years, 12 months ago
dont bother if I wanted to I could have fixed it easily by now but dont feel like it anymore
PurpleDragon2000
3 years, 12 months ago
Well I mean I already fixed it but alright
Chrisicefallenmoon
3 years, 12 months ago
Momma has the perfect expression of pissed dylans tired is good features are good
manuelstars
3 years, 12 months ago
I hope you can still hear my late opinion XD

I will be sincere with respect to the previous page, it suits you, but apart from that, it suits you to combine the necklace with the sweater, it combines very well, also with Dylan and his star necklace.

Regarding Delilah's neck, I do not know why many complain about her neck, since if we see it like this, Portia also has a fairly long neck that both a poodle such as Portia and Delilah such as Dalmatian or even a greyhound, are always Long neck and slim body due to its feral canine nature (which to be honest, that is your best style, and that I still admire since you started with your first Delilah drawing, but if you rely on her canine physics based on the series, even if they are not realistic, that I still like and convince me by your style).

And with your anthro practice I know that you are able to improve much more and I saw a lot of your progress with some collaborations with PSY 101 that in itself is prospering (and although 《in my personal likes and points of view that I want to clarify so that there are no bad understood or demands and I know Hyper that you will not take it badly ^ w ^》 I do not like somewhat exaggerated or robust extravagant physiques such as exaggerated breasts and booties [as well as exaggerated canine genitalia in males], since I know that they are commissions that they ask you and you have to make their requests), it is good that you prosper and improve each time with practice, I know that I will be somewhat demanding and I apologize from my heart; but I prefer the somewhat particular anthros with big but not so gigantic breasts, a slim body like Delilah is attractive (I respect everyone's tastes), and a waist, booty and legs naturally made and straight as I imagine her by his physical body based on the series...

And excuse me for the SPAM I prefer it to be more natural like this:
https://static1.e621.net/data/3a/cb/3acbe93652dadcb8cb7...

But each one to his style that makes them characterize you especially Hyper. > /// w /// <

You always do good jobs despite the commissions and the conditions that they provide you with how they want the drawing ... ^^

I hope that my opinion has not bothered you, and I apologize for writing almost like a book review ... X3

Very good drawing & keep it up Hypergal!!!
(I give you 10/10 with the second page of the comic)  ;-)
HyperGal
3 years, 12 months ago
oh yeah that is the best Delilah design, unfortunately someone else already made that design so I can't use that exact design, I might make some alternate designs for Delilah in the future but for this comic she's meant to be very big, but yeah I agree that design is incredible, also I have not worked with Psy in quite a while now, and my artwork I made with him is no longer here so I have to learn on my own to make anthro designs which is not exactly easy
manuelstars
3 years, 12 months ago
But there is nothing wrong with basing yourself on the physique that I show you since it would not be to copy his style but it would be as a very well done reference or inspiration (since if you notice I know that you are capable of making those kinds of proportions that remain very well to the beautiful Delilah) [just imagine in Portia with a natural anthro, like this].

And if you see it that way it is something more attractive and natural (well according to my opinion, of course) but the one that counts is yours ... X3
manuelstars
3 years, 12 months ago
Anyway it is good that you experience another type of style that you like Hyper ^^

Too bad I don't have PayPal, since I would ask you for a commission for a friend, but I don't have and I don't think there is any other alternative... :'-(
DeanRadiant
3 years, 12 months ago
The librarian looks very good but I’m not very convinced by delilah, I think that the big boobs make her torso too long
DireKyre
3 years, 12 months ago
I love the proportions you've gone with here, the slightly elongated necks and tallish frames capture the kind of lanky, spindly build a lot of dalmations have [some of them go as far as to look greyhound-like, at times], and sleepy Dylan is adorable. I've already commented on my love of your hyper-sized frames so you know I enjoy the other sort of proportions quite a bit.
Frozenguin
3 years, 11 months ago
DELILAH IS SO WAY FAR BEYOND 100% HYPER ULTRAPISSED!!!!!!!!!!
Blackjack21
3 years, 4 months ago
I personally love the proportions here
HyperGal
3 years, 3 months ago
thank you
AltAccount1234
2 years, 9 months ago
Yet again, another unfinished comic. Any plans on finishing this one as well?
Kenneth1941
1 year, 8 months ago
Sweet Home Alabama
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