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Chris and Troy in Brotherly Brawl

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Keywords male/male 64983, human 54518, embarrassed 6308, humiliation 5653, brothers 3736, fight 3058, wetting 2865, fighting 2841, embarrassment 1983, embarrassing 935, chris 901, bullying 662, humiliated 606, role reversal 472, humiliating 429, unconscious 331, dizzy 257, ko 237, knocked out 179, slapstick 136, roles reversed 97, seeing stars 85, eyes rolling 74, knocked out cold 58, eyes crossed 58, troy 56, cross eyed 34, juvenile jenga 28, dizziness 2
Written by Wotzael
Edited and Revised by SDCharm

"But I told you, I don't need it!", the little boy whined as his older brother dragged him to the bathroom.

"No 'buts' but yours to wash, Troy! If you had read the rules, you'd already know that you must take a bath before bed!", Chris replied.

"But I ALREADY did, HOURS ago! If someone needs a bath, it's you! You stink!"

Chris stopped, utterly shocked. What he just heard was not only an insult, but a major violation of rule #3!

"How dare you..! That's it! If you won't obey, I'll make you!"

As he tried to disrobe Troy by force, he wasn't expecting him to grab his arm and flip him over his shoulder.

Too bad.

CRASH!

When the young boy opened his eyes, everything seemed different. First, the bathroom was spinning and blurry. Second, he was feeling comfortable, but a bit cold too. And third...was that Troy holding his pants?

Reality struck Chris like a lightning bolt just then. He was in his underwear!

"Oh, you're awake? Cool! I was getting you ready for your bath!", Troy explained.

His brother went bright red. He then found himself shaking with intense rage.

"RAAAGH!"

Chris rushed to give his little brother the beating he deserved, but Troy stepped aside just in time. His charge ended with a passionate kiss to the wall.

WHAM!

The boy stumbled back, stunned. With his blackened eye and missing tooth, he looked like he took quite the beating himself. His eyes were crossed and he was seeing double, so he tried to find Troy by following the laughter. Maybe he should have watched his steps instead…

When his foot touched the soap, his fate was sealed. The boy performed a spectacular backward flip and landed on his butt.

But it wasn't over. His meeting with the wall had shaken the shelf, and a family-sized shampoo bottle decided that it was the right moment to fall.

Right on the kid's head of course.

BUNK!

"Daaah~! I want da wed balloon, dadOW!", he began right before another bottle followed.

Luckily for him, none of them opened, so his hair was still dry...unlike his underwear. But who could blame him? After being knocked out three times in a row, the poor little guy had no more control over his bladder.

The last couple hits had left him with two round bumps, on top of each other, and a dozen stars to admire. He was smiling widely, his tongue flopped out to the side.

From his point of view, the bathroom was spinning even faster now. So fast, in fact, that he couldn't see Troy's look of disapproval.

"Now you REALLY need a bath", the kid said, overlooking his older brother.

--

Days later, the valuable lessons learned at bath-time had sunk in rather strikingly.

Have you ever seen those 'body swap' episodes in a cartoon? Well, Troy was in the middle of experiencing one.

Every single day, he had been scared of bumping into his big brother and getting lectured about ever-changing rules. But not this day.

Today, he was free to lay down and relax, because it was Chris who was scared of crossing his path.

As for Chris, his memories of what happened the other day were still hazy, but he could basically sum it up as follows: Troy knocked him out, stripped him naked and then bathed him like a baby.

Just thinking about it made him blush and shiver.

He had spent the whole day avoiding his younger brother, but every time he did, there was a little voice in his head telling him how wrong it was. HE was the one in charge! And he DESERVED some respect! And...maybe Troy didn't actually beat him up. After all, he couldn't remember how he was knocked out. Maybe he just slipped on the wet floor, and his brother took advantage of it...

Yes, that had to be it. There was no way Troy could be stronger than him! It was time to remind him who was the big brother here!

It was at this moment that his little brother went out of his room...still not in his pajamas! At 8p.m!

"Hey! Where are your pajamas? You should be in bed by now!" Chris shouted, feeling the anger boil again.

"I'm not tired. Plus, you're not wearing yours either", Troy replied.

"Are you talking back to me again?", Chris said as he gave his brother an angry look. "It's time for BED! No funny business!"

"But I'm not tired! Why should I go to sleep if I don't need to?"

As an answer, Chris grabbed him by the collar. Physical violence wasn't his thing, but right now he needed to reassert his authority.

"Okay listen up! I've had enough of this attitude! Now obey me, or I'll put you to sleep myself!"

"THAT'S ENOUGH!", Troy shouted. "First the shower, now this...your rules don't even make sense, you just want to boss me around!"

Chris couldn't take it anymore. This rebellion had gone too far, and it was time to crush it!
With a roar of rage, the boy threw a vengeful fist that rushed for his brother's face...and was stopped by a tiny hand.

The boy's eyes opened wide with surprise, then with terror when Troy slowly clenched his fist.

"W-wait!", Chris stammered. "You c-can't hurt me! I-it's a violation of…"

KA-POW!

The sound of the impact echoed through the house. As his body shot out of his clothes, Chris suddenly recalled that he, to, was supposed to be in bed by now. Then he slammed head-first against the roof and landed...right on his bed.

Problem solved.

Chris, realizing he didn't break his own rules, suddenly felt very happy. Then his brain mixed this joy with a plate of spinning stars and a full glass of dizziness. I'm sure you've already pictured the result.

Troy didn't bother checking his punch's effect. He already had a nice view of his brother's butt sticking up, and he could even notice a little change of color on the bed.

"Still not in pajamas AND wetting the bed? Bad Chris!", he said, but the older boy wasn't listening. Right now, he was busy following the winged bells to Loopyland.

"Asleep already? Looks like your rules were made for YOU...anyway, goodnight baby bro!"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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by SDCharm
Chris and Troy. They're the Tom and Jerry of Juvenile Jenga. Troy just wants to have fun and be a normal kid while Chris wants to control every aspect of his life. Chris detests rule breaking and brutish violence. However, even he's not prone to losing his ground when his emotions run high. How will Troy escape? By being himself of course.

Written by Wotzael
Revised and Edited by SDCharm

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Published: 3 weeks ago
Rating: Mature

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xxmusiq
2 weeks, 6 days ago
So question I have to know the answer to. Is this scenario canon in your story? Or will it be eventually? Even if its not shown in the comics. Because the idea of chris loosing a tooth because of his little brother and having to bare with that minor imperfection would be perfect. Not only would chris having a missing tooth up front make him seem slightly less mature but the fact that hes such a perfectionist, everything around him has to be perfect but when he smiles in the mirror he sees his pearly whites has an imperfection? Thats priceless. I can only imagine him getting a false tooth there only to have it fall out when he yells too much or gets knocked about.
SDCharm
2 weeks, 6 days ago
The comic runs on cartoon logic. So if he's missing a tooth he'd grow it back eventually. That sounds like a good scene to put in the comic though.

I'd say this scenario could be canon. We'll say it takes place somewhere down the line.
xxmusiq
2 weeks, 6 days ago
Imagine if he were missing his two front teeth. The two front teeth missing is like the basic stereotypical kiddie smile lol. I cant wait to see how it happens down the line. The look on chris's face whenever tyler smacks his fake teeth out of his mouth is making me laugh already.

I also realized the cartoon logic thing right after i typed this. Lots of your characters lose teeth as a form of expression..being deranged or dizzy
johndoe3815
2 weeks ago
I am just wondering where their parents are? It seems that the boys' mother or father would have stepped in at some point and tried to stop this bickering between brothers. I understand that you may want to focus on the kids but you did say you wanted to make the comic more realistic and I would assume that if this story is going to be canon, it would also need to be realistic. This would mean that with all the noise and fighting going on, it doesn't make sense that a parent doesn't make their presence known somehow. As a writer, I deal with this type of thing all the time as I try to make my stories as realistic as I can.
SDCharm
2 weeks ago
Wouldn't most just assume the parents aren't home?
johndoe3815
1 week, 6 days ago
not sure if it is a good idea to leave 2 young boys by themselves without supervision, especially when they are going to sleep and obviously don't get along. Also, they never seem to be around. I think the story would be better if you would throw in some dialogue from a parent, even if they are not shown, but are off the page somewhere else in the house and getting frustrated with the commotion. Something like this, would make it seem like a more realistic home life and still focus on the boys, who could continue their bickering until someone ends up hurt or whatever. This of course would lead to the eventual parent figure yelling something like, "you got what you deserve." or something to that extent after it is all over with.
SDCharm
1 week, 6 days ago
Sorry but no. I'm gonna have to veto this. For a number of reasons, some of which I can't go into.  

Suffice to say, I actually have thought about the dynamic with the parents and what I'm doing here doesn't really go against any of what I have planned. What time the boys go to sleep, whether or not they're aware of how they get along, what time the parents get home, whether or not they trust Chris to be in charge, all of that stuff is stuff I've thought about and don't really need to get into at the moment. I trust most would just assume the scenario is that the parents are currently not home. I don't need to insult their intelligence by spelling it out when it currently isn't necessary or the focus at the moment.

Also, you might be a little mistaken about the intention with this series. While it definitely is supposed to be a lot more grounded and realistic, I'm definitely intending to blend it with the most abstract and absurd. The kids are going to have more flexible lives than that of what most people might assume they do. Although, to be honest, how much flexibility a child is given changes depending on where they grow up and who they grow up with anyway.

Don't expect to see too many parents. Or even adults for that matter. Unless I specifically feel I need to focus on them for something it's most likely not happening this way. Plus, I haven't gotten that far into the series regardless.

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