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thanks Cloud. I just hope that I didn't overdo it with the clothes ;)

Though, I expected her to be a bit more frightening. You know, these teeth are sharp, and she likes to bite.

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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your welcome.

oh she is a meat eater huh??
I have so meat I'd love for her to eat. ;)
oh wow!
did i just make that joke??

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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No, no, more than eating your meat she'd enjoy sucking the life juices out of you ;)

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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Sounds like fun.
......Wait do you mean blood or cum??

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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Depends on her mood and how much she likes you. Probably both ;)

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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oh ok sing me up than!

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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Let's just say that there's a story I've been working on for quite a long time, though it never really worked out. Should I get that far, you may serve Sweetie as dinner.

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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YAY!
.....hold on as dinner.
I'd like to serve her dinner not be dinner.
But than again that would be one hell of a way to go.

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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Now Cloud are you saying that would rather serve a vampire someone else for diner then to injoy it yourself.

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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I'd never serve somepony else.
I was talking about real food.

But you do have a point tho it could feel very nice.

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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For some reason, more than likly the alcohol, I was thinking about the types of vamp's who cause extreme bliss in their victims when they bit them.

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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oh.
Well if is that type than I'd love to be her food.

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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Wouldn't anyone

*sigh*

I'm going to have one hell of a dream tonight, I can just tell already.

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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if you are dreaming of this than it well all ways be hell! :P
I too well be dreaming of this.

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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I really want to write that story now, but I never get past one stupid point at the beginning, and I've already worked out most of the rest of the story.

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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I'd be happy to help you out with it if you like.
And i know Dragon6 would be happy to help too.

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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I'll try again tomorrow. It's just the part where somepony get's turned into a vampire, and is overhelmed by everything that's happening. I have problems describing how the character thinks about the whole situation. At the same time I need to explain a bit more about my vampires without turning it into a boring lecture.

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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Idea!
have the first part be about the world like a ch 0.
then have .5s as needed.

As for the other mmmm I got nothing.

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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The world begins as it usually does, so a world chapter isn't needed, but you just gave me another idea... that could work out.

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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I did??
Cool!
Glad i helped!

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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Count me in if you need anything.

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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thanks you two. If I have a specific question I'll come back to that offer ;)

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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Not a problem, I'll help out no matter what it is. Everything from moral support to a kick in the rear you ask I'll deliver.

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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I think what I need now are pillow and blanked goodneight

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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Then so be it. My your dreams be peacful and pleasnet.

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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That' s an intersting way to picture her. I wouldn't worry about the clothes, its very vampiric.

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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I still mourn after that Rarity as vampire fic that was never, and will probably never be, finished. I like vampire stories and such. I don't need them always, but they can be quite interesting. Well, I wanted to make her look eccentric, and I think I succeded.

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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Rarity As A Vampie now that would be something to see. Ok i have to ask but do you prefer old school vamp stories or the more modern spins.

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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Hard to tell. I know that I dislike that Twilight Sparkle guy, and I'm not talking about the pony if you know what I mean. I like stories where they are pictured as physical strong creatures, maybe with some magic, and mixed with an impulsive personality.
May they be haughty blood princes who kill everybody who annoys them, or creatures silently living between the humans, trying to find their place in the world.

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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OK so we agree about a certain movie va....I'm not going to honor him with that title.

"	LuminousShot wrote:
	I like stories where they are pictured as physical strong creatures, maybe with some magic, and mixed with an impulsive personality.

Sounds like you might prefer the Braham Stoker version of a vampire.

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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Let me get a bit more detailed because I don't know about the really classical version of vampires. They might be physical stronger and posess magic, or strange abilities, but they still have their weaknesses, quite dire ones I'd say, like needing blood to survive, not being able to cross flowing waters, aversion against garlic, crosses, sunlight, and I think a few more things. Though, I usually ignore a few of the more ridiculous ones like the water problem, and the crosses.

Regarding the personality, I prefer the ones who hold little of human lives, due to their long lives, but are intelligent enough not to slaughter without reason. I also like stories where they act in packs/families (not imperatively blood related) since eternity can be quite lonesome ;)

Cloud006

12 years, 10 months ago

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oh not don't forget about Holy water.
That burns them like fire.

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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Still sounds like Stoker. He, at least in my opinion,created the ground work for the modern day version of what we would consider a vampire. The one work of his that I know about, that concerns vampires, is Dracula. In it he basicly created an image of a vampire similar to what you described.

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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I roughly know about Dracula's story. I actually only know that he's based of Vlad Tepes.

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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Yep, It's been awhile since I read it but in it Stoker decribes Vlads' fall as a man, his pursuit of his lost love, his battles with VanHellsing and his death at the end.
Their are a few other things that I could point out but unfortunately alcohol is messing with my memory right. Needless to say the image that you have is pretty close to want he created.

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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I think the first vampire characters I became interested in were from a little Indie RPG. I suppose you don't know Vampires Dawn, it's probably unpopular (even more) outside of germany. It tells the story of Asgar, Alaine, and Valnar, whereas Asgar is a complete sadist, who tricked Valnar, took his blood, and kept him as slave, to revive Alaine, the only girl he ever loved and probably the only person that connected him with his human side. So we have the human lover, Valnar, on one side, the haughty vampire, Asgar, on the other one, and Alaine, who still believes that vampires are the superior race, as voice of reason between them. These were the first concepts of vampires I knew.

Dragon6

12 years, 10 months ago

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That sounds vaguely fimilar. Could you tell me who created it.

*fyi* I was stationed in Germany for about three years and I might go back their some day*

LuminousShot

12 years, 10 months ago

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