The drawing is great but the art is lacking a little. A little constructive feedback if I may? You have continuity issues in the pose. Her hair says she's just started moving back but her knees say she's in the tail end of a lunge forward so it kind of gives the impression that she's doing a "Matrix" style bullet dodge and falling backwards. That same kind of contradiction is there in her swing, she's already bent her right knee like she's putting her weight into a blow but she is still winding up. The line of movement just feels wonky. Don't get me wrong, the drawing is very good, proportions, shading, highlights, all really good, the pose just doesn't do it justice. Also she is holding her sword sideways.
The drawing is great but the art is lacking a little. A little constructive feedback if I may? You h
