Don't let the negative people go to your head, that's generally a bad practice.
As for feedback, hhm... How is the fur system set up? do you have several, you obviously use the combs but do you also use dynamics? From other posts I can tell that the mouth looks fine, actually I envy those teeth, but the lips feel weird to me, have you tried adding a bit of texture using either short hairs or of course procedural skin. Finally, your pupil seems to be too glossy for real life and not glossy enough for the show.
Hope I've been somewhat of a help.
Don't let the negative people go to your head, that's generally a bad practice. As for feedback, hh
i do need to learn how to make better eyes (but i cant afford any real classes)
for this one no i did not use dynamic hairs (but i am working on learning the hair system better ... i have a decent understanding of it but i dont know about using it for him lol)
the lips are a bit dodgy yea ... but i know that i will be doing some tests later with vertex weights and see if that is what i need to do to make it look better (other people say his fur around his snoot needs to be shorter)
i might use dogs as a reference for the length of fur for the snoot
i will be testing some eye material set ups and eye topology setups later but without any classes for it i can only hope to hit the mark by sheer luck lol
it is a bit of a help i do need to learn how to make better eyes (but i cant afford any real class