I'm working at improving my comics. This is a little idea to experiment with styles. I know the japanese onomatopoeias are maybe too much, but take it as a parody (and they make it look so epic =P)
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You can download this and other pics in HD, alternative versions and sketches, also make requests and suggestions about characters and thematics. Thanks in advance.
Looks good, as for the Japanese I like it :) if you want to mimic manga more I think the katakana that looks like — is usually turned the other way since all it does is elongate the last katakana and it adds a flow to reading it if you have it going down in this instance, just a pro tip since I have Japanese lessons! If you look at some manga pages with the text going down with it you should see what I mean!
Looks good, as for the Japanese I like it :) if you want to mimic manga more I think the katakana th
Good start. My only suggestion is to flip the text. In Japan, manga comics are read from right to left. Text however is a bit of a toss-up. Japan has a bit of a tug-o-between modernizing and keeping with tradition, so text can be found written in top to bottom, left to right; or right to left.
Good start. My only suggestion is to flip the text. In Japan, manga comics are read from right to le
