She shook off the bad case of baby-brain she had at the beginning of the page but finds herself face to face with the terror of her babysitting escapade only to get smacked where the sun don't shine for her troubles. If only she saw the really huge and obvious plank of wood on the ground, balanced on a ball, in-between her legs. Damn you, hindsight.
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I can almost see Sonic having a moment of tranquil fury and maybe even disowning the young girl rather than spanking her. I really hope she gets her comeuppance with a paddle drilled with holes.
I can almost see Sonic having a moment of tranquil fury and maybe even disowning the young girl rath
I hope I didn't come off as too critical. It's definitely funny, but the protagonist is a little unsympathetic... you can't really root for her. I'm not a fan of the Hayes Code that says all bad guys must meet their comeuppance, but this is one of those cases where I do hope something bad happens to the girl, especially as Amy hasn't done anything to warrant her wrath. I suppose when you get down to it, she's heartlessly bullying Amy.
I hope I didn't come off as too critical. It's definitely funny, but the protagonist is a little un
I guess relying on her attitude at the beginning to be enough wasn't good enough after all. I can't help but see it differently because of what I believed Amy's intention to be but it isn't carried across well enough as it's only 12 pages long and I didn't put too much focus in making her unsympathetic. But again, that's a case of having different priorities when it comes to these than some other people. But as I've said, you won't have to worry about that after this one ends.
The stuff where I concern myself more with the storytelling is with Survivor Island so maybe that'll be a bit more fair for those who want that.
I guess relying on her attitude at the beginning to be enough wasn't good enough after all. I can't
LOL. I love the reference to the WB cartoons in the second panel. BTW, I know I'm not politically correct but, that little girl needs to get her ass beat. (I hope she gets it, too.)
LOL. I love the reference to the WB cartoons in the second panel. BTW, I know I'm not politically
