I like this drawing, it touched me. The face is so kind with a little sadness and the chosen colors are matching the goth theme in a new way. Looks for me a bit like there is a slight white veil over it, is it intentional? Maybe its just my crappy screen, but if you have Photoshop and wanna test it:
Image >> Adjust >> Levels > there is a empty space on the white side, I would remove it.
I like this drawing, it touched me. The face is so kind with a little sadness and the chosen colors