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MLP FiM -Taming the Element's of Harmony Part 1

I'm going to make Big Mac marry me part 1 and part 2
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Keywords male 695386, female 574827, pony 73319, alicorn 6812, my little pony: friendship is magic 4265
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic – Taming the Elements of Harmony Part 1

Lightning Hoof smiles as he was going over what he was going to do for the day, “Hmmm a visit to Twilight Sparkle and her friends but I won’t say what I’m up too to her or her friends I want to surprise her.” He smiles as he was both a Pegasus and a unicorn pony clot.
“Sire are you all set to leave tomorrow morning.” A gryphon name Ben asked as he had to make sure that everything was in order for the flight tomorrow.
“All is fine my friend just make sure you and Melissa are well rested I would like you too to fly to the Pony Ville tomorrow ahead of me and find Twilight Sparkle I believe she is the now local librarian it should be the only tree in the Pony Ville tell her that someone is wanting to meet her and her friends and she is to gather them before mid morning I will arrive at the hospital that they have there.”
Ben nods and smiles as he bows, “Of course sire anything else.”
Lightning Hoof smiles, “Yes after that please fly to the castle and speak with both princess’s there I request a meeting with them both it seems that this part is in need a king of sorts to help keep the peace between both princess’s here.”
Ben nods and smiles, “Yes sire I‘ll tell Melissa what is to be done tomorrow.”
“Good and also do breed Melissa she is starting to go in heat soon and I don’t mind my two favourite gryphon’s to become mate’s besides these ponies do need a new look on life and also when you get to Pony Ville please tell Rarity that I would like cape made I don’t want the other pony’s to know that they have a prince in town.” Lightning Hoof chuckles softly using his magic to move a few little things into a bag although Ben could tell were gifts for the two princesses’.
Ben smiles and nods bowing deeply, “It shall be done sir...”
“Ben please call me Lightning Hoof I see you and Melissa as part of my family and not servants besides I have know you both for all my life.”
Ben smiles and nods, “Of course Fleethoof and what colour would you like the cape.”
Lightning Hoof smiles, “Any colour will do now go and tell Melissa what is happening for tomorrow and also tell her she can drop sire and other title’s I may have I rather blend in into Pony Ville.”
Ben smiles and nods, “Yes Lightning Hoof and sleep well.”
“Thank you my friend.” Lightning Hoof smiles as he pulls covers over him as Ben closes the door to his suite.
Ben smiles and goes to find Melissa to tell her what is happening.
Melissa smiles as she fluffs her neck feathers well grooming herself as Ben walks into their suite, “Ahh Melissa your still up.”
“Yes Ben I’m still up anyway what did our sir...” Melissa start before being cut off.
“He wants to have the royal titles drop he wants to blend in so call him Lightning Hoof ok.” Ben smiles and walks over to her grooming her neck feathers.
“Ok but why are you grooming my neck feathers.” She asked.
“Why do you ask or can’t I help a lovely gryphon hen I know all my life and want to spend the rest of my life with.” Ben smiles and pulls her close to him so that she was in his lap.
“What did you say Ben?” Melissa asked him wanting to know what he said was true.
“I want to spend the rest of my life with you Melissa.” Ben smiles and tilts her head to the side as he locks his beck with hers.
Melissa blinks in surprise as Ben locks his beak with hers as she closes her eyes kissing him back as she felt his talon’s rubbing her belly.
Ben smiles and breaks the kiss, “When you go into heat I’m going to fill your belly with our egg’s Melissa I rather have someone I know and trust to be my mate rather than someone I don’t know and trust.”
Melissa blushes and nibbles Ben’s neck softly, “That is true and I accept your offer of mateship but if you look at another gryphon funny I’m going to beat her down and show her who the top female gryphon is.”
“Mmmm sounds good but I get to claim them after ward can’t have a female gryphon go around after my top female gryphon has beaten her go off and try and get her friends now can we.” Ben smiles and yawns softly.
“Mmm true we’ll have to collar her then.” Melissa smiles and yawns.
“Oh before I forget Lightning Hoof has some jobs for us before you go into heat ok it shouldn’t take any longer then a day or half a day.” Ben smiles and lays back pulling Melissa back with him.
She smiles and nods as she turns around in his talons, “Mmmm sounds good.” she nuzzles his chest softly before slipping off to sleep.
He smiles and yawns “Sleep tight my lovely hen.” He nuzzles her head softly before slipping off to sleep.
The next morning Lightning Hoof smiles as he puts his bag on his back and spreads his wings knowing both Ben and Melissa where on their way to see Twilight Sparkles as he goes for a walk before a blue Pegasus come speeding past before doing a look back and coming to stop.
She fly’s back to whoever she past as she flaps her wings looking at the Pegasus Unicorn, “Hey umm you looking for a guide to find your way around.” She asked.
Lightning Hoof smiles and chuckles, “How about a flight Mrs.” He smile’s.
“Mrs. I’m no Mrs. the names Rainbow Dash, I’m the fastest Pegasus pony ever.” Rainbow Dash smile’s.
*Hmm Rainbow Dash huh, one of Twilight Sparkles friends.* he smiles and nods, “A pleasure to meet you Rainbow Dash, I’m Lightning and no one around is faster than me.” He smiles.
“Oh you’re on Lightning,” Rainbow Dash smiles, “the first one to reach the library in Ponyville is the winner.”
*Prefect this pony doesn’t even realise I have business in Ponyville today.* He thinks to himself, “Ok Rainbow Dash your on it’ll be good to race in good fun.”
“Yeah yeah but I’m going to win this race.” Rainbow Dash smile’s.
“We’ll see little one,” Lightning smiles, “on the court of three.”
“Ok then,” she smiles, “One,” both get ready to race, “two...”
“Three.” Lightning Hoof say’s before both take off at the same time as Rainbow Dash caught a glimpse of Lightning’s cutie mark before she blinks again as he was 30 meters in front of her.
“No way am I losing to you Lightning.” She calls after him.
“Then show me that speed you’re known for Rainbow Dash.” He calls back to her.
“Oh it’s on.” She calls back to him as she puts on the speed flying past him as he smiles.
*That’s a good pony just think that your winning.* He thinks to himself before looking down and seeing that they were outside the cloud city before driving down.
“Huh what s that sound,” Rainbow Dash looks behind her to see that Lightning wasn’t there behind her before a super sonic boom was heard, “what the hay is he doing going that steep any...” she had make a few quick flaps before driving down him.
Lightning smile’s as he keeps going with his steep dive building up more speed and going faster than supersonic or any flying pony could like Rainbow Dash.
*Damn it I can’t keep up with him it’s like he is blur and what’s up with that cutie mark of his.* she thinks to herself as she tries to remember where she had seen that Cutie mark before.
Lightning Hoof smiles as he had his bag’s magical attached to himself so that they didn’t come off going the speed he was doing as his forelegs where out in front of him as his wings were at a angle better suited for the speed he was doing.
Rainbow Dash was trying to catch up as she was watching Lightning before blinking and seeing that he wasn’t there in front of her.
Lightning smiles as he was closing in on the location of the finish line as he pulls up and flaps his wings using his magic to slow himself down before landing as he places a note on the letter box as he could tell that both his gryphon friends were here before teleporting to the hospital to wait for Twilight Sparkles and her friends to show up.
Ben and Melissa where inside chatting away with Twilight Sparkle telling her what she needed to know before asking for Spike to take note.
“Please that won’t be needed we rather deliver the message in person.” Ben smile’s.
“But I need to tell the princess that you’re on your way so that the guards can escort you to her.” Twilight looks between both gryphons.
“Take her advice Ben, besides an escort to see the princess would be good for us cause then we can talk in private with the princess of the sun and the moon.” Melissa smile’s.
“Wait both princess but, but,” Twilight starts before Spike sighs, “Twilight didn’t you hear them say beforehand both Princess’s would need to be there for when this Lightning Hoof is ready to see them.”
Twilight looks from both gryphons then to Spike and then back again before sighing, “I’m sorry I must’ve missed that part when you were both talking but I’ll tell the princess that your both on your way to see her and sister.”
“Thank you Twilight and please if you see Rarity ask her if she can make a cape for Lightning Hoof, he doesn’t want others to know who he is while he is visiting Pony Ville not even the mayor.” Melissa smile’s.
“But she must know about this it’s her right to know who is visiting Pony Ville.” Twilight say’s.
“Twilight if Lightning Hoof is coming to Ponyville today wouldn’t it have been news yesterday or last week.” Spike tells her.
“Your right Spike so we have to keep this secret right.” She ask both gryphons.
“That’s right and also Lightning Hoof would like you and your friends to meet him at the hospital that is here in Pony Ville.” Ben smile’s.
“Ok I’ll get my friend’s and I’ll see if Rarity can make a cape for him before we all go meet him.” Twilight looks to Spike before telling him to take note and send it to the Princess to tell her of the arrival of two gryphon escort’s that are with Lightning Hoof.
As Spike sends the message to Princess Celestia, Rainbow Dash lands panting hard on the landing of the balcony of the Library as she lays down, “Did I beat him here Spike...”
“Beat who Rainbow Dash?” Spike asked Rainbow Dash.
“Another Pegasus but he was like Princess Celestia and Luna.” Rainbow Dash pants as she rest as sweat beads down her forehead.
“Hmmm nope I haven’t seen another Pegasus like Princess Celestia or her sister lately besides you and the other Pegasus pony’s.” Spike looks at Rainbow Dash as she lays there resting.
“Spike did you send that message to the princess.” Twilight calls out to Spike.
Ben smile’s and nods as he picks up the note with his beak. “Hmmm Twilight Sparkle this note seems to be address you.” Melissa looks to Twilight.
“A note address to me.” Twilight blinks and uses her magic to get the note from Ben.
“Hey Twilight what’s this about a note.” Spike calls out as he brings Rainbow Dash in.
Both Ben and Melissa nod and walk over to the purple dragon to help bring in the blue Pegasus pony, “Such a state to be flying at the speed she must’ve been going I wonder who she was racing.” Ben smiles putting his body down as Melissa helps the purple dragon put Rainbow Dash on his back.
“No idea but Twilight can we use your bed so this Pegasus Pony can rest up for a bit.” Melissa asked
Twilight nods as she keeps reading the note while pointing out her bed, “Oh my god oh my god,” she was nearly going to scream out loud, “I don’t believe it Lightning Hoof is wanting a meeting with me and my friends.”
Rainbow Dash’s eyes fly open at the name, “Did you just say Lightning Hoof.” She looks at Twilight as she remembers where she saw that lightning hoof cutie mark from.
“Yes Rainbow Dash why do ask.” Twilight looks to her friend.
“I was having a race with him but if that note is here then,” she looks down, “I lost the race we were having.”
Ben blinks and smiles gently sliding the blue Pegasus pony onto the bed, “So you met Lightning Hoof already young pony.” He asked her.
“Yes but I didn’t think I was racing against him until just now and call me Rainbow Dash.” Rainbow shakes her head thinking, *I have never seen a Pegasus fly like that before and I’m the fastest one in all of Ponyville.* she thinks to herself.
“Well he wants to meet us at the hospital at 10:30am today and also I need to inform Rarity about a cape that has to be made for him too.” Twilight sighs.
Rainbow Dash blinks, “Guess I’ll go and round up Apple Jack and I can tell Rarity on the way too.”
“OK Rainbow Dash just let me write out the part of a cape to be made,” Twilight use’s her unicorn magic to bring a feather pen and paper to her and write up the part of a cape to be made, “also Rainbow Dash try and not let Rarity make something that would draw attention to Lightning Hoof.”
“I can try too Twilight but you know that pony she would want to draw attention to someone new.” Rainbow Dash takes the note before going out the front door to see Rarity and to get Apple Jack.
Ben and Melissa both smile and nod as they bow to Twilight Sparkle, “Thank you for that Twilight.” Ben bow’s his head before nuzzling Melissa.
Melissa nuzzles back, “Ok Ben we’ll get going to the castle.” She smiles and nods to Twilight before both walk out the front door pleased with them self’s for the first part of what they had to do.
Twilight sighs and shakes her head, “Have good flight to the castle I’m sure the guards would escort you to the princess Celestia,” she looks to Spike, “your coming too Spike you’re the only one that can send a message to Princess Celestia and besides what if we do a get a message from the princess and I’m out meeting up with Lightning Hoof”
Spike groans before breathing out a jet green flame as note appears he catch’s it, “To my most trusted student Twilight Sparkle I would be honoured to have an audience with Lightning Hoof’s guard also please learn as much as you can from him and tell your friends that if they want to learn more about him ask without upsetting him if he is here on business with me and my sister I would be pleased to meet him and please also tell Spike not to complain so much he is after all the best dragon messenger you have. From Princess Celestia.” Spike blushes as finishes reading the letter, “Oh my, she thinks I’m best dragon messenger you have.”
“Well at least we can go and see both princess’s now.” Ben smiles as he nods his head and gives a small bow as does Melissa.
“We can’t thank you enough Twilight Sparkle for sending that message and we now have a reason to wear those guard uniforms we have been carrying around.”Melissa smile’s.
Twilight blinks and tilts her head, “Guard uniform’s why would you be carrying around guard uniform’s for.”
Ben smiles and chuckles softly, “We are the guards to Lightning Hoof so we must carry them not only that we can blend in as visitor’s when we aren’t wearing them.”
“Oh I get it now it would look out of place if you were wearing them in town with no real call for.” Twilight looks at them.
“That is true Twilight.” Melissa smiles and looks to Ben nodding as he takes off waving to Twilight before Melissa bows her head slightly before taking off after Ben.
Rainbow Dash walks to the door and stands next to Twilight, “Next time my old friend is in town tell me to send her to Lightning Hoof I think she could use both Ben and Melissa’s help that is if Ben doesn’t take a liking to her.”
“Rainbow Dash I think if that happen, Melissa would pound Gilda into the nearest tree and then the ground.” Twilight shakes her head.
“Oh and why is that.” Rainbow ask.
“Well Ben and Melissa are a couple so it would only seem fair that Melissa would try and stop someone that isn’t worthy of Ben’s time or her time,” Twilight looks to Rainbow Dash, “besides shouldn’t you be on your way to Apple Jakes and Rarity’s by now.”
“Yeah yeah as soon as you give me that letter for Rarity to read.” Rainbow Dash looks at Twilight who sighs and uses her magic to bring the letter over to Rainbow Dash who takes it with her teeth before taking off for Rarity’s first as Twilight calls for Spike so that they can get going to round up Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy.
Meanwhile.....
Lightning Hoof was at the doctor’s waiting for the nurse pony to finish up as three young fillies’s come running in with few bruises and some scrapes, “Now what have you three young fillies been up too.” He asked them with a smile as he kepted his cutie-mark hidden.
Applebloom blinks and looks at him, “Oh hello there we were just trying out something so that we can get our cutie-marks and I’m Applebloom.”
“I’m Sweetie Bell.” A white unicorn with purple and pink hair smiles and nods her head.
“And I’m Scootaloo the fastest of the three.” A dark orange pegasus pony states.
“I’m Lightning Hoof and I’m just visiting Ponyville to meet up with a few fillies to show me around.” He smiles and bows his head.
“Lightning Hoof, hmmmm name sounds familiar can’t remember where I heard your name before.” Applebloom tries to think as she looks to Sweetie Bell for an answer who shakes her head along with Scootaloo.
“Any way why are you three in such a hurry to get your cutie-marks for,” He smiles, “besides three young fillies should be studying what they are good at and not what they aren’t good at cause I know three that are like you in a way but they wasted they young life’s trying to find out what their cutie-mark is and not enjoy who they are meant to be until they were in their teens that is besides having a blank flank shouldn’t be frown on I used to have blank flank until I was fifteen cause I was studying on what I liked and what I wanted to do with my life not rushing off to find out who I wasn’t.” Lightning Hoof smile’s.
“Wait so you didn’t have a cutie-mark until you were fifteen.” Scootaloo laughs.
“It’s not funny Scootaloo besides if he was studying what liked and what he wanted to do then we should give it a try.” Sweetiebell looks at Scootaloo.
“If you know what your good at then go for it, it’s not too late to study or have fun enjoy your young life’s while you still can besides you might become famous in your own right and surpass your sisters or other family member’s and even those you look up too.” Lightning nod’s and smiles.
“Can we see your Cutie-mark please?” Applebloom ask.
“I think so but you must promise me that you’ll study and do what you like most  no more running around and hurting yourself I don’t want to see three young fillies coming in here with broken bones or a head injury.” Lightning ask them all.
Applebloom, Sweetie Bell and Scootaloo talk among themselves for a bit before looking to him, “We promise to be good and study and do what like most.”
“Good but remember there is time for what you like most and time for your friends.” He smiles and lifts his wing showing them his cutie-mark which was a horse-shoe with a dark grey could behind it with a lightning bolt coming out from the cloud with a few little lightning bolts of different colors.
“Wow that is a cool cutie-mark but Rainbow Dash is cooler and the fastest I know.”  Scootaloo says.
“What if I told you I won a little race against Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo.” Lightning smile’s.
Scootaloo looks at him and blinks, “No way no one can out fly Rainbow Dash.”
“I did and I’m the fastest in my home town.” Lightning smile’s.
Sweetie Bell does a double take before her eyes go wide, “Oh my Gosh your you’re...” she trails off.
“I’m what Sweetie Bell.” He looks at her before she screams out loudly in surprise.
“You’re the prince Lightning Hoof.” Sweetie Bell looks at him.
Applebloom blinks and then looks at Sweetie Bell, “Your right now I remember his name and cutie-mark we should tell the mayor and every pony.”

“Hold on you three,” he folds his wings back down, “no going off and telling anyone ok this isn’t a visit to see how Ponyville is doing I’m only visiting to get to know Princess Celestia and Princess Luna’s Friends before I meet them so no telling anyone and if I hear that you told someone when you shouldn’t I’ll be upset at you three ok,” he looks at each one, “now I’m trusting you three to keep this a secret so please don’t ruin my trust in you to keep your mouths shut about me visiting ok besides I do have something for three young fillies if they are good.”
All three of them nod, “We’ll be good Lightning Hoof and we won’t tell anyone who you are either.”
“Good now you three can go ahead of me ok I’m only here for a cheek up and that is all.” Lightning smile’s.
“Thank you Lightning Hoof.” Applebloom smiles as the nurse pokes her head out,
“Lightning Hoof your ne...” she was cut off by him.
“Oh no I can’t go next these three young fillies can go ahead of me please besides I’m only here for a cheek up while these three are here for getting their burse and scrape’s taken care of.” He smiles.
“Well that is kind of you for giving up your spot for them  Lightning Hoof,” she smiles and looks to the three fillies, “ok you three come on in and let’s get you three clean up and out of here so that you can go and do something else that is less hurtful.” She sighs shaking her head.
“Thanks again Lightning Hoof.” Applebloom smiles following her friends in.
“My pleasure Applebloom and stay out of trouble you three.” He smiles and waits for them to finish getting their burse’s and scrape’s look after.
Lightning Hoof smiles and looks around as he brings up a viewing globe into appearance so that he could see what was happening around Ponyville and to see the sights while he waits.
“Umm Sweetiebell, should we tell someone about Lightning Hoof about him being who he is.” Applebloom ask.
“I don’t think so Applebloom he said we get something if we keep his secret besides I don’t want to ruin his trust he gave in us and trust is something earn not given so I’m not going to say anything to anyone besides that would ruin the trust and a friendship besides you heard him, he didn’t get his cutie-mark until he was 15 cause he study so I’m going to study what I like but we can still be the Cutiemark Crusader’s.” Sweetiebell smile’s.
“I agree with Sweetie Bell I don’t want to ruin a friendship or trust besides what if he is right what if we are going about getting our cutie-marks all wrong, I mean I look up to Rainbow Dash alot but knowing that there is someone faster than Rainbow Dash will push her and me to become faster but I’m not sure if I want to go that fast and try to win.” Scootaloo looks to both Applebloom and Sweetie Bell.
“I guess your both right I won’t tell anyone besides I trust Lightning Hoof if what say’s is true then yeah I’ll his secret safe.” Applebloom smile’s.
“Girls you do know that keeping someone’s secret safe is good way of trust and friendship, Besides I have nearly a whole hour with Lightning Hoof and that is just his cheek up and not to mention his physical is another 30 minutes,” The nurse pony smiles as she bandage’s the three young fillies scraps gently, “there all done you three can go now and stay out of things you’re not meant to do ok.” She smiles and shows them out before looking to Fleethoof who just smiles and nods having made his viewing globe as he gets up.
“I guess it’s my turn then right.” Lightning Hoof looks at the nurse pony who nods and smiles.
She nods and smiles, “That is correct...” she watched get him and smiles, “by Celestia your very bit handsome and graceful.” She watch’s him more and smiles.
“Thank you my dear nurse but tell me you not just checking me out now are you.” Lightning Hoof smiles and looks at her.
The nurse blushes and smiles, “Oh umm I didn’t mean too but I did mean what I said.”
“It’s alright and I’m flatter that you said that now where shall I stand so that you can start.” Lightning Hoof smiles.
“Oh anywhere will do is fine,” she goes over to the sign and turns it around with her mouth before walking back to him as she hum’s softly as she enters the room and blinks, “oh my you truly are handsome even with your wings spread out.” She walks around him and smiles nodding before starting to looking him over.
“You can look closer if you like I don’t mind.” Lightning Hoof smiles and nods to her.
She blushes and smiles, “Oh umm thank you I do need to make sure that you’re in good health and all,” She smiles and takes to write down his wing span as she blinks, “by Celestia your wing span is bigger than Celestia’s and Luna’s wing span.” She compares the document’s from both Celestia’s and Luna’s own check up’s.
Lightning Hoof smiles bows his head and smiles, “Then I feel honoured that you say that my dear nurse.” He smiles.
She smiles and nods, “Ok leg strength is in the physical but if you want to go ahead with it I’m fin...” she blinks as he was right in front of her looking into her eyes.
“I think we can wait until the physical for that one besides I rather do something that your body wants cause your body just scream’s I need him, I want him,” He smiles and nuzzles neck, “just listen to your body’s desire’s cause I know I am and mine is saying to please the nurse in front me that has been missing the one thing she has missed out on.” He whisper’s the last part into her ear.
The nurse pony blushes and smiles as she shudders softly hearing the last part, “I guess I should besides no colt ever comes to court me,” she nuzzles his neck softly as a tear run’s down her cheek, “will you ease the need I have inside me Lightning Hoof.” She ask him.
“I can do that and more but first things first my dear.” Lightning Hoof smiles and kisses her lips.
The nurse pony gasps and kisses back closing her eyes as she melts into the kiss.
Lightning Hoof smiles inward as he starts to use his magic making a necklace appear around her neck as the magic in the necklace starts to take effect on her body and her mind slowly.
The nurse pony shudders and breaks the kiss before looking down at the necklace, “T-t-thank you for the necklace,” she smiles and blushes deeply, “seeing as I know your name I think it’s right that you should know my name,” she steps back and bows to him, “I’m Redheart the head nurse pony of this clinic and to be yours in mind and soul.” She blinks as she doesn’t know what made her say that last part even as her necklace glow’s softly.
“It’s a pleasure to meet you Redheart and I will make your deepest need full filled by claiming you as my own in body, mind and soul.” Lightning Hoof smiles and bows back to her as the necklace around her neck glows with soft blue as image’s start to enter her head.
One image that kepted coming up again and again was one of her taking care of a foal and teaching her along with him teaching the foal and looking out for them both as her necklace starts to change matching her cutie mark.
“Easy there Redheart we’ll have plenty of time to tend to your need’s for now you still have a check up to complete and I think I could help you with that,” He smiles and looks at the clip-board and uses his magic to write in his height and everything else that she need to do, “now we have plenty of time but first things first.” He smiles and looks at the beds before using his magic again to make a more suitable bed appear for what he and Tenderheart where going to do.
Redheart blinks and watch’s as she watches as the a suitable bed appears, “Is that for us to enjoy.” She ask staring at the bed as it was of lush velvet.
Lightning  Hoof nods and smiles, “Yes it is for us but most importantly it’ll be where the first foal will be made by us also I am wondering if I can look over Rarity’s list too I think she’ll be happy with what I have plan for her and Apple Jack too.”
“Oh why what do you have plan for them.” Tenderheart smiles and jumps lightly onto the bed.
“Lets just say that Apple Jack and Rarity are going to be busy with their own making of a foal and leave it at that.” Lightning Hoof smiles as he steps onto the bed and kisses Redheart’s lips cutting off what she was going say.
Redheart blinks and blushes as she felt him kissing her lips before kissing back deeply wanting nothing more than to be the first to bear his foal and to help him with whatever he was going to do.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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First in pool
Last in pool
First part I'll add more once I have but this is going to be about oh say 6 or 7 parts long also I want to thank https://inkbunny.net/deathsia on here and those that write other Fan-fic this one dosen't have any adult themes in it the second part might or even the thrid part don't know you'll have to keep an eye out for them

Yes I'm a brony, go to http://bronyshow.com/ I have listen to all the podcast and I love the sho.

Oh if Apple Cidder and Chef Sandy read this its going to be awesome to have my fan-fic on their show

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Cloud006
7 years, 7 months ago
Cool story.
I must say i like where this is going.
Fleetpaw
7 years, 7 months ago
thank you be sure to read the other two parts too
Cloud006
7 years, 7 months ago
your welcome.
and I'm right now.

oh and I too would love to make love to RedHeart she is so hot!!
Fleetpaw
7 years, 7 months ago
yeah I know and she doesn't get no screen time so she can have Fan fic time
Cloud006
7 years, 7 months ago
you can say that again.
Almost all of the other background do get some screen time but her and DJ-P0n3.
And evan in the new eps she gets no time.
Derpy/Ditzy is now a running gag Bon-Bon and Liyr too.
but no love for RedHeart. :(
Fleetpaw
7 years, 7 months ago
So true I'm planning on making RedHeart a little bit more involved in one part and Derpy is the new Waldo
Cloud006
7 years, 7 months ago
YAY!
more RedHeart! :D ;3

And yes she is.
it is a lot of fun to look for her.
Ditzy is cute too.
tho I have never been good at where is Waldo.
His very very very short lived cartoon show was very cool.
Fleetpaw
7 years, 7 months ago
Yes the Where's Wally cartoon show was short lived but I loved the show so much I used to have all the volumes of it on VHS format but they aren't on DVD or Blu-Ray which is sad.
Cloud006
7 years, 7 months ago
that is cool.
I wish i did.
guess it was not  popular enough. :(
Fleetpaw
7 years, 6 months ago
I had the books and I think I have a Scrabble game some where too.
Cloud006
7 years, 6 months ago
cool!
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