"I wanted to know more about his death, so I snooped in the archives files of the hospital
panel 2
"There were no records of his hospitalitation or that mysterious doctor either"
panel 3
"I interrogated the nurse many times over the next few days, and finally convinced her to tell me more about it"
panel 4
"She explained that she received orders to delete every files regarding Bryce. One of them contained many names and addresses she unfortunately couldn't remember, except for one address, which I am currently investigating.''
panel 1 "I wanted to know more about his death, so I snooped in the archives files of the hospital
1. I decided to investigate more about his death, so I tried to search on the archives/files of the hospital.
2. There was no registration of his hospitalization, nothing about that mysterious doctor either.
3. I interrogated the nurse for many days, and in the end, she agreed to give me some more information.
4. She explained that she received orders to delete all the files regarding Bryce, which included a specific file with many names and addresses that she unfortunately doesn't remember, except for one address, the one where I am now.
1. I decided to investigate more about his death, so I tried to search on the archives/files of the
Panel 1 "I decided I'd investigate more about his death, so I tried searching the hospital's archives."
Panel 2 "There was nothing registered about his hospitalization, and nothing about that mysterious doctor to be found either.
Panel 3 "I interrogated the nurse (it might help to specify if it's the nurse that was in charge of taking care of him or if it was just one of the nurses at the hospital) for many days, and in the end she agreed to give me some info(formation)." (I just simply changed "at" for "in")
Panel 4 "She explained that she had received order to delete all of the files regarding Bryce. These included a specific file containing many names and addresses, most of which she sadly didn't remember. She could recall one address, the one I was at now."
I tried :P
Panel 1 "I decided I'd investigate more about his death, so I tried searching the hospital's archive
"I decided to investigate more about his death, so I tried to search in the archives/files of the hospital."
panel 2
"There was nothing registered about his hospitalization, nothing about that mysterious doctor was found either."
panel 3
"I interrogated the nurse for many days, and in the end she agreed to give me some info."
panel 4
"She explained that she received orders to delete all the files/archives regarding Bryce, and they included a specific file with many names and addresses that she sadly doesn't remember, except one address, the one where I am now."
panel 1 "I decided to investigate more about his death, so I tried to search in the archives/files
"I decided to investigate more about his death, so I tried to search on the archives from the hospital."
Panel 2
"There was no registration of his hospitalization, and nothing about that mysterious doctor either..."
Panel 3
"I interrogated the nurse for many days, and at the end she agreed to give me some info."
Panel 4
"She explained that she received orders to delete all the archives regarding Bryce. These included a specific file with many names and addresses that she sadly doesn't remember, except one address, the one where I am at now." _______________________
I had to uze the on zcreen keyboard zince my keyboard of my laptop iz dying. -vv-;
Panel 1 "I decided to investigate more about his death, so I tried to search on the archives from t
I've looked for more info about his death. The first thing to check was the hospital archives.
Panel 2
There was no record of the patient and of course nothing on the doctor either.
Panel 3
Over the next several days I pumped the nurse for any leads.
Panel 4
She's finally broke and told that she was under orders to destroy any and all records of Bryce. I pushed for more details any relations? any addresses? Sadly, the only place she knows: was the place I am already investigating.
Panel 1 I've looked for more info about his death. The first thing to check was the hospital archi
My chief complaint of this comic is that the translation is oftentimes too verbose to convey a point. I'd like in these panels to be more succinct but still carry spirit of the translation. Text in the third panel can be broken up to cover this and the next panel easily.
My chief complaint of this comic is that the translation is oftentimes too verbose to convey a point
