(In order of 2nd picture) Yusuf - Baggy Dancer Street Emma - Wizard-isk Bookworm (with suspenders) Ivaan - Motorbiker Baylene - Country Girl Moas - Suave Suit + Chaps Navia - Posh Street Purizah (Flat Chested Form) - Gothic Diva Dress (She gives no ****s what she wears) Kyoka - East Asian Emphatic Street
i gotta be honest, this feels more like they're going off to some kinda convention more than it does casual wear. like, Ivaan i can kinda see but the rest look too done up and specific to really pull off as "casual"
i gotta be honest, this feels more like they're going off to some kinda convention more than it does
perhaps though personally i'd suggest maybe toning things down a bit? make the personality overtones into hints at it. You've clearly gone to show each character's style and personality through clothing but it feels less like something influenced by how they are and more like its defining who they are and making them sorta into tokens.
perhaps though personally i'd suggest maybe toning things down a bit? make the personality overtones
yeah i know. but thats why im throwing this out there. concept means this is the stage you consider all the things :P that and i cant help but butt in where things aren't my concern + the fact i have to be that one guy who doesn't say "its amazing" to everything i see on this site. like seriously. i don't think i've ever seen one criticism in my time on this site. probably makes me look like a peice of shit XD
yeah i know. but thats why im throwing this out there. concept means this is the stage you consider
Oi, it's always good to share criticism : ). What I do think is as long as the characters themselves fit well in a story or aren't dry, almost any attire would be okay.. And it's not like all of their wears will be culture oriented. xD Hmm.. either way, culture oriented or not, it's guud. Characters can ring further than their appearance if developed well.
Oi, it's always good to share criticism : ). What I do think is as long as the characters themselves
well yeah, though im not gunna lie i had to stop myself saying what i said in a dickish way. its good to know not all their gear is gunna be based on their literal cultural basis because i almost said: "looking at this makes me think honestly a bit of walking into a room and seeing a mexican with a sombrero and poncho on, a french person in a black and white stripy top with a beret and an african in a tribal outfit" i kinda felt that was a bit extreme compared to the point i was trying to make though
well yeah, though im not gunna lie i had to stop myself saying what i said in a dickish way. its goo
Heh, thanks Nori.. Although I must submit that my stiff pose trend is really starting to bug me- It's tough to shake.. I should start practicing tougher ones.
Heh, thanks Nori.. Although I must submit that my stiff pose trend is really starting to bug me- It'
