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Keywords male 1179470, female 1069609, cat 211102, feral 90536, mouse 53532, vore 32577, kitty 19358, cubs 18733, kitten 9241, owl 6603, digestion 5510, reformation 310, pelican 114, half-anthro 16
Heroes of light "origins"

During a beautiful sunny day, 3 families, great friends for a long time, a family of owls,  mouses and cats, despite their differences were great friends and faithful fellow warriors, since these 3 families had great superpowers that Made them great warriors who defended the good, so that they called themselves the heroes of light; On the same day, the puppies of the three families would be born to give birth to the next generation of heroes, from the family of cats were born three young offspring, a male cat with a reddish fur coat and green eyes like his father, a totally black cat That mysteriously had the left eye of red scarlet and the right it had green and at last a white cat with blue eyes like those of its mother whose both colors of fur divided in the last two kittens; The family of mice only had a daughter totally white and with blue eyes like her mother, and lastly the family of owls that had just had an egg, from which a majestic owl of coffee color and amber eyes. The puppies were quite special, they opened their eyes from the moment they were born and soon afterwards knew how to walk and talk, the red cat called "Cat", the white cat called "Snow", the black cat called "Sirius" , The white mouse called it Mouse and the owl called Owl.

Everyone was very happy, however, nothing is perfect and the little ones learned it in the most horrible way; Days after the birth of the puppies, Sirius was kidnapped during the cold night and as if nothing could get worse the next day received an attack from a powerful enemy and his army, the parents began to defend the cubs, however, the army Of the enemy surpassed them and after hours of combat the adults began to tire and the defeat was imminent reason why the small Cat in spite of the pleadings of its companions entered the fight and demonstrated to be a quite powerful rival no matter its little time of Born, however, the father of Cat the subject and to take it next to its companions, he take a parchment and invoked to a pelican.

“Philip, I need you to get them out of here and fast, take them in your subjugular bag, we can give you a little time to escape but just a little, hurry.” said Cat's father while giving him a sword with a note “To Cat, is my first-born and is a gift to always remember us, good luck Philip.”

Philip approached the small ones with the beak, and although a little hesitant at first, but after their parents gave them the approval they entered the bag of Philip who began to fly quickly while the little ones remained inside, once they were Philip and the little ones watched as where their parents were, there was a big nuclear explosion, Philip knew what that meant, the parents of the puppies had used a joint suicide technique to kill the enemy leaving the orphaned puppies. After a while, Philip could not take it anymore and closed his beak completely, leaving the pups locked up and then began to swallow them alive while the cubs tried to hold on to not be swallowed but they were not able to leave and all ended in the Pelican stomach.

"What are you doing?" Cat asked, trying to get out.
"Is not it obvious,? having lunch then digesting them and getting energy as with any food" The pelican responded with a bit of malice.
"Why do you do it?" Snow said between sobs.
"Because I'm free now, and I do not have to follow your father's orders," Philip said more and more maliciously.

The little ones began to struggle to get out while Philip only teased them by letting them know that for him they were but a part of their nutrition and that soon they would only be energy to be able to continue flying, after a while, Philip tired site to the Puppies and the gastric acids of Philip began to fill the stomach, nevertheless, Philip had a rather intelligent digestive system doing that instead of pain and burns, the puppies felt pleasure and although at the beginning continued fighting and begging to leave, after a while Everyone was stroking and rubbing the stomach in which they were doing the process faster. After a couple of hours it had already darkened and there was nothing left of the little ones but bones and a little hairs and feathers.

After more time of flight, Philip landed in a big hut in the middle of the forest and once inside the hut began to regurgitate and when the bones passed through his neck began to reform the puppies and by the time all They were intact, as if nothing had happened.

"Children, from now on us are in luck, during the flight unfortunately their parents gave their lives to save us and I decided to give us a small gift," said Philip with kindness. "The world is too hostile and four puppies like you have shown Or would last a day, learn that there are beings who would be able to kill them without any mercy, so I made them feel that feeling of being defenseless knowing that us were going to die, so learn, your parents will not be to protect us, almost Take care of each other and survive; The gift I gave them were several powers, one that will allow us to know the heart and the purposes of who they are, the other is that now if us are devoured can not be digested, in case the second fails can self reform, Can heal ten thousand times faster than an average living being and finally have full control of your digestive system and can control if us digest their food whenever they want, although the latter seems useless in situations where you know that you do not eat in several Days is almost indispensable. "He said with all of the world while the cubs watched and although, normally they would remain on alert, but the first power that mentioned the pelican let them know that they were safe, then Philip gave Cat the sword Of his father “now children i hope to see them someday again” said Philip and began the flight. Then Cat opened the note and read it aloud:

"Dear children, if you are reading this is because we have died, from now on you must take care of yourself, but there is something important to remember, even if they are from different families all are brothers and should take care of themselves and protect each other, I have asked Philip that put them in a dangerous situation so that they learn the hostile of the world and that only together they will be able to surpass it; The sword that you have Cat, was forged thousands of years ago for who created our families and is sacred, will never break, so use it to protect your brothers and remember us every time you use it, it is the only thing left of us. Now you are the defenders well and have to learn to control their abilities look for the kitsune master for it, but remember, hunt, fly, hide, fight, etcetera are things you should do for yourselves without the help of more than your brothers. And lastly the cabin that will now live before was the house, not only us, but many companions, so look for colleagues and friends to become stronger.

Remember that we will always love you and be in your heart. Sign: "His parents"

After reading the note everyone started to cry, however, Cat tried to encourage them since what had happened that day was only the beginning, but the important thing is that they stay together and never give up; His words motivated his brothers and from that day they would not be alone again as long as they had each other since they were the new generation of "the heroes of light."

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This is the story of my first 4 characters created. I honestly designed them when I was six years old but I never gave them a story until later and in fact this is, I hope you enjoy it

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male 1,179,470, female 1,069,609, cat 211,102, feral 90,536, mouse 53,532, vore 32,577, kitty 19,358, cubs 18,733, kitten 9,241, owl 6,603, digestion 5,510, reformation 310, pelican 114, half-anthro 16
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DigiThing
5 years, 9 months ago
You need to proof read this. Your sentence structure and grammar are all over the place. You said you  "designed them when I was six years" and honestly it looks like it was written by a 6 year old.

The Idea seems solid. But you just have to put more effort into it.
darkgaker
5 years, 9 months ago
Thank you, is really nice that some people come to tell me how to improve, and to be honest, this story is very old, and I already had some more practice, and well, first of nothing, this is only some kind of "sketch" of the oficial version, the real version still unwrited, so this is only the main idea and just a vore tale that I did on my free time, and secondly, when I wrote this, I hasn't any knowledge of english, because it's not my native languaje, so I used the google traductor, but maybe I will rewrite it with muy own words soon, I just need to improve my english, and if you feel interested, soon I will upload some more stories that I recently did with a little more of practice, maybe they will be better than this one, anyway, thank you for your comment, I will try to be a better writer :3
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