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Season 2.2 Page #15
Ok, my dad has gone, I was depressed and then play Sonic '06... then headache and school at 7:00 a.m but finally here it is!
I'm not pretty sure if I'll update this week 'cause I need to plan the commissions for June 1st (as I told ya in one of my Journals) so, see ya next updating day!

The last panel is: I don't really : I guess

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Type: Comic
Published: 8 years, 6 months ago
Rating: General

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MidnightMuser
8 years, 6 months ago
Actually, the way you worded it is fine. "I don't really" and "I really don't" both work. The way you have it, though, works better. Your only issues is that when he says "going" it should be "go" in this case. And "into your body" should be "in your body." Really minor things. You're doing really well!
SilverTyler25
8 years, 6 months ago
thanks XD I'll practice that things and so sorry for the mistakes
MidnightMuser
8 years, 6 months ago
It's ok, no need to be sorry! English is tricky. Keep it up!
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